假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同旧式写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Ms Smith,
I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art
exhibition for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9th of July
in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 painting will be on show, but
high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event.
As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, we'd like to invite
For you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1. 5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。如有错误（每行只有一个错误），如无错误，在答题卡相应的位置上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；
此行多一个词：把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上，用斜线（﹨）划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，并附带前（后）词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不用改。
A 60-year-old Australia woman jumped onto the back 76. ___________
of a 4-metre crocodile stop it from killing a 34-year-old 77. ___________
man. The crocodile grabbed one man as he was sleeping 78. ___________
in a tent at a beaches campsite in Australia. The crocodile 79. ___________
entered the tent around 4 a. m. Monday and dragged 80. ___________
the man outside. The woman, that was camping nearby, saw 81. ___________
what was happening and jumping onto the crocodile. The crocodile 82. ___________
then let the man go and turned on the woman, pulling him 83. ___________
towards the water. Luckily a third person shot 84. ___________
the crocodile death just in time, saving the woman. 85. ___________
短文改错
Although it might be very strange of students to 76.____________
Talk about fashion, they do care about that they 77.____________
wear in school. They think their school uniforms make 78.____________
them to look like a number of clones, especially when 79.____________
they are doing morning exercise on the playguound. So 80.____________
they all want to change their bored school uniforms for 81.____________
fashionable clothes. Beside, girl students love all 82.____________
kinds of decorations when boys like different sports shoes. 83.____________
Tunning shoes had become popular among boys since LiuXiang 84.____________
won first place in Athens Olympic Games in 2004. 85.____________
第 II 卷（非选择题，共35分）
第三部分写作（共两节, 满分35分）
第一节短文改错（每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正。
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
It is five years since I graduate from NO.3 High 76.__________
School. Last Saturday, the class that I was on held a 77.__________
get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It 78.__________
was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody 79.__________
and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed 80.__________
this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent 81.__________
together and the people they were familiar with. It was 82.___________
a pity which some of us were not present as they had 83.__________
gone broad for further studies, but they called back 84.__________
or sent greeting card from different places. 85.__________
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共50分）
第三部分：写作（共两节，满分50分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second half 66.______
of senior grade 3 before I realized it. It's more 67.______
than three months before I graduate middle school. 68.______
At present, I'm busy with reviewing my lessons in order to 69.______
take the college entrance examination. I hope to go to 70.______
Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not 71.______
only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best to turn 72.______
my dream into the reality. Most of my classmates are also 73.______
studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe everyone 74.______
will be able to enter a very good university and college. 75.______
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：
如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；
如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
With the development of advertising, advertisements are now
connected with people’s lives．Is this the good thing? 76．___________
Some people think advertisements tell lies and made people 77．___________
buy things that they don’t need them．Advertisements 78．___________
cover a lot of space, which wastes paper．But they take up too much 79．___________
time on TV．Therefore, they say advertisements should stopped． 80．___________
Others think that advertisements influence people’s choices 81．___________
of goods．It give information about various goods and help 82．___________
people to make better choices．What’s most, some nice 83．___________
advertisements are very popular and is a kind of art that many 84．___________
people like．However, people get tiring of advertisements, and 85．___________
advertising companies should keep this in mind．