TheEnglishCornerinZhongshanPar-优题课

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs a English secretary. I’m really interested in this position and hoped I can work for you.
I’m 18 years old and will be graduated from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July. I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English, specially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very fast. On my spare time, I read a lot of. Poems is my favorite. I enjoy music very much either. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. However, I’m easy to get along and I like to make friends.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua

On Wednesday morning, Tom was walking along the streets. Suddenly he heard two shots. It came
from the bank. He ran to the bank but saw a man coming out of. The man was short and fat with red hair. He has a bag of money and a gun in his hands. The man ran away quick and was not caught that morning. That afternoon Tom went a cinema. He saw the thief again and phoned the police. They caught the thief. How an exciting day for Tom! The bank gave him 100 dollars for a reward.

第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（√)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分．
I am a high school student. A few days before, one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop the school. He said that he wanted to start his own business. I tried my best to get him change his mind, but failed. I know it is difficult of him to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies, but I want to insist that she should give it a try. Now there are only 90 days leaving before the test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advices.
Yours，
Li Hua

短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When I first learned to write in English，I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her advices. Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed it my teacher. She liked it very much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I want to get along well with my classmates , so I
can’t , because I am very quiet . I can find words to say
when others are talking with me. I’m very impressing
by those girls always keep talking and smiling .If the
world were full of people who are always talk, it would
be a very noise place! I know some people are quiet
when others like to talk a lot, which make a harmonious life .
And they will know my classmates quite well so long as
I find the confidence to speak out .
But I feel lonely in the class because my quietness.