假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改: 在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
Dear Editor,
I'm a middle school student naming Lily. I'm writing to tell you something I don't think it good. Recently I've noticed many of my classmates often went to the Internet bar near our school. The other day I went there, too. I was very surprising to see many students playing games, seeing films and chatting. Some were even talking about love affairs on-line. In my opinion, an Internet bar should be a place which we can find much useful information. As is known to all that the Internet is a window to an outside world rather than a place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use it. Otherwise, it will do us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make sure that the students use Internet bars positively.
下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改H)处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The zoo has big basket for rubbish. People can throw waste into them. On the Saturday afternoons there are usually a lot of people around the cages which the lovely animals are kept, and last Saturday nobody was there. Mr. Patties was surprised. But he was even much surprised to see few children around the basket near the tiger's cage. He quickly went up and looked at their heads and saw a little rat run about in the basket and looking for food. The rat afraid and the children were more interested in the rat than the tigers. How a lovely scene!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I want to get along well with my classmates, so I can't, because I am very quiet. I can find words to say when others are talking with me. I'm very impressing by those girls always keep talking and smiling. If the world were full of people who are always talk, it would be a very noise place ！ I know some people are quiet when others like to talk a lot, which make a harmonious life. And they will know my classmates quite well so long as I find the confidence to speak out.
But I feel lonely in the class because my quietness.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处。
Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say，“ There's a bum(流浪汉）in toilet. Tell the bus driver. ” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn't believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.