Ⅵ短文改错Mr.Lin:I’mseriousilltoday-优题课

此题要求改正所给文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的橫线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正。此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边的橫线上写出该词，并也用橫线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行的右橫线上写出该词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一橫线，在该行右边橫线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
They day before the speech contest（比赛） English teacher ____________
　　talked to me . She said that she and my schoolmate all ____________
　　wished me success , but it didn't matter that I would ____________
　　win or not . When I was on the stage the next day , I felt so ___________
　　nervous as I shook like a leaf . There were so many people ___________
　　present! Suddenly , I caught a sight of my English teacher in ___________
　　the crowd . She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered __________
　　her words and calm down . I did a good job and won the first __________
　　prize . Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. ___________
　　Whenever I see them I will seldom think of my English teacher. __________

When we got up in the morning every day, we start our daily____________
routine: washing our faces, brushing our teeth and maybe take a bath.____________
When you do this, do you ever think that there is enough water or not?____________
One thirds of the 4.4 billion people in the developing world____________
has no way to clean drinking water. Water-related diseases kill____________
10,000 to 20,000 children every day in the developed world. ____________
What comes to our minds when we read these numbers?___________
Do you think we are lucky or not? In a fact, the outlook for the____________
future, even for us, is not very bright.
So let us value our water as much as possibly not only for___________
ourselves, but also to our children.____________

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（）,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear editor,
I’m a college student and I’ll graduating in half a year. I’m very worried about my future, because find a good job is so much difficult. At the moment, my parents want me to be a teacher, and I don’t like that idea. During my holiday break, I work part-time as a tour guide in my hometown. I liked job very much. But my parents didn’t agree with me. They thought the work was difficulty, even though one could make a lot of money. That is the most important to me is that being a tour guide won’t take me far from home. I always consider what my parents say, but it’s hard for me to take a decision. Could you give me some suggestion?

仔细阅读下列句子，每句中均有一个错误，请找出并在横线上改正，请按下列情况改正：
该句多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（ / ）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该句错一个词：把错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
A day, I came across an old friend in a museum.
My friend was in his sixties. Therefore, he looked so
young. I asked him how he stayed young.
He told me take exercise was a good way
to keep health, such as, having a walk.
His office was 2 miles far away from his home .Every day
he went to work on foot instead taking a bus. He
also gave me some other suggestion to be in good
health. He thought how fun it was to do sports.
Heard what he said, I decided to take action.

此题要求改正文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误, 在改行的后面划对号 (√); 如有错误 (每行只有一个错误), 则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线 (\ ) 划掉, 在该行的右边的横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉。
此行少一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线, 在该行的右边写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Yesterday we went plant trees on the hill near_____
our school. The boys was made to dig pits(坑).The_____
girls were told to plant the young trees into the pits._____
All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were all wet_____
with sweat. After the young trees planted, we_____
began to water it. The water was at the foot of____
the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶)_____
of water from one to other up to the hill.____
We did not finish water the trees until it_____
was dark. We feel very happy.____