第 II 卷 (共35分)
第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断，如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾；如果有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When people think about precious things, they usually
think about money or jewelry. I am not very rich, and I have 76.
something very preciously in my room. It’s not a CD player or 77.
a cellphone. It’s the view from my window. I’m lucky live 78.
near a park. My window faces with the tops of the trees in 79.
the park. Below the tree I can see children on the playground, 80.
young couples walked quietly, mothers with children, and 81.
old people sitting on the beach. The whole world is before 82.
their eyes. My classmates like to go online or listen to music, 83.
but when I have a free time, I just sit on the chair and 84.
enjoyed the most precious thing in my room: the view. 85.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)戈lj掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
I’m writing to invite you to visit China and spending the Sumner vacation with me． I have made wonderful plan for it．First，we can go to Qingda0，there it is cool and mild， and have funs at the seaside．Then we were to participate in a Taiji camp in the Wudang Mountains． You are curious about Chinese Kongfu，but I believe this is a good chance to learn it． Last of all，I have also been longed to take you to the countryside．We can stay there for a few days and vi sit to some relatives of me．I hope this plan suits you good and I am looking forward to
your coming．
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Ù），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
The winter holiday are coming, that makes me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I'd like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I'll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don't want me go out. They are afraid I'll be knock down by a truck or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade him.
On Saturday morning, I went in a boat trip with my big family. They got on a boat on Lamma Island. Grandpa and Dad go fishing. Uncle Billy and his family lied on the deck enjoying the sun. I played cards with my cousins happy. Suddenly, weather became very bad and it started to rain! We both felt surprised and disappointing. We decided to stop the trip. Uncle Billy invited us to pay a visit on to his home on Lamma Island. Bought some seafood, we cooked a delicious seafood dinner at Uncle Billy’s home. Although we stopped our boat trips, we still had a better time
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处,多者（从11处起）不计分。
I saw a accident happen on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off his motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking. I thought it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误机器修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult work. Just clicking your
mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You
needn’t step out the room. It seems easy and quick. And there’s always a
trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you trouble. You may find the
color of the article is differently from what you want, or the size is either too
small nor too big. If you want to be different, you’d better not to buy clothes
online. Once you put up the clothes you bought online and go out, you will
find many people in the street wearing the same clothes like you.