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Mr. Lin:
I’m serious ill today and can’t go to school. I’ve caught a bad cold because I swim with some of my classmates yesterday. This morning I had a headache . After take my temperature, my mother found that I had light fever. So she took me to see a doctor. The doctor said whether I had caught a bad cold and advised me to stay in the bed for several other days. So I am writing to ask about a sick leave of three days. As for the lesson to be missed during the absence, I will do the best to make them as fast as I get back to school .
Yours: Wang ming
Nick is a 28-year-old Australian man, which life is very difficult because he born without arms or legs. Some people used to make fun of him and said he looked like a monster. Doing normal things seemed impossibly to him. However, Nick never gave up, and after many failures, he finally learn to swim, fish and even surf. Most surprising, he completed university and earned the two degrees. Now he is the CEO of two company.
When asking about the secret of his success, Nick’s answer is: Attitude is altitude. To him, nothing is impossible if you has enough determination to overcome difficulties. He thinks a positive attitude is the key of success.
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help the others. One day on his way school, he saw a little girl crosses the road. A car was coming towards to her quickly and the girl was so frightened to move. The car near hit her. Just then Liu Kai rushed up to her and caught her on the arm. The little girl was saved. She tells him where she lived, but he took her home. When Liu Kai hurried into the classroom, the teacher has already begun his lessons. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for which he had done.
Yang Li, a five-year-old girl living next door to me, very clever. Because she is not old enough to go to the school, she often asks me to teach herself to read, write and draw. She studies hardly and soon she learns a lot. One evening last month I was doing my English homeworks when she came to my house. She asked me how I learned English. “You would find English a bridge for so much knowledge,” I said. She then wanted to learn English, either. She has learned many English words so far but her parents are very grateful to me.
This afternoon I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I am wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can help others in return for. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.
We are going to take the College Entrance Exams in about sixteen days. Therefore, many students still don’t know what to balance their study, rest and physical exercises while prepared for the Exams. They usually devote too much time to go over their lessons, what results in a poor health and low efficiency of learning.
As the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise make a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We’d better leave us enough time to rest and sleep since it enables us to learn our lessons more efficient. What’s more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study, future work and creative activities.
In brief, as we are preparing for the Exams, don’t forget that rest, exercise and study were equally important.