英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，现在请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处错误
要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Dear classmates,
Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. I often read English aloud and try learn something important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and form the good habit of thinking in English. I listen to a lot and talk with others in English. In this way, I was improved my spoken English. I keep a diary in English every day but my writing English is becoming better and better. I also try my best to master the necessary grammar. By this mean, I can express myself in English correct. That’s the way I have been learning English. I hope it will be useful to you.
That’s all. Thank you.
Dear Nick,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August 8. And 1.
I think you made a wise choice to travel here. Sichuan provinceis2.
rich in attractions and enjoys many famous places of interests.3.
Jiu Zhaigou is well known for it’s beautiful lakes, of which 4.
the water is clear but looks colorful. It can excite visitors’ 5.
imagination .Another attraction is Dujiangyan which was built 6.
2000 years ago and was still playing an important in irragation 7.
today. Besides, the nice weather a can make your trip much 8.
enjoyable. I am sure that you have a good time. 9.
I am looking forward to your come.10.
Over the past twenty years, American country music become 1.
more and more popular. Some writers are no longer writing about 2.
modern values of the USA. In 1950s, American music was about other3.
things . Money was also thought to be important. Ten years late, 4.
some writers turned other subjects. During these years, many young 5.
students were angry with society. So songs were often full of angry. 6.
Political leaders were not well thought and those songs often made 7.
fun of them. Country music today remains much the same as ago. 8.
One subject which country music often returns is “the good old days”.9.
And in “the good old days”, people love life on the open air. 10.
Thank you for your e-mail ! You ask about my friends and what 1.
we like to do. I guess I do that most people do. I like reading books, 2.
watch films and listening to music. My favorite sport is volleyball. 3.
Most my friends play volleyball with me. My best friend is two older4.
years than me. She goes to a different school and we always get 5.
together after school to talk and have fun. Tell me yourself, your friends6.
and what you like to do. I would also like to know something about7.
China . We have read about China in school and I am very interesting 8.
in learning more about it. Please e-mail to me soon. Thanks. 9.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon now. 10.
Peter was walking back home from school, thought about the 1.
class today. It was about giving the first aid. Suddenly he saw 2.
a young girl lay on the ground. She seemed to be asleep but Peter 3.
saw that her face was very pale. He walked up to the girl and call4.
softly,“Miss, Miss.” She moved slightly and gave no clear response .5.
He put her hand under her nose. Yes, she was even breathing . Then he 6.
suddenly saw that it was a wound on her left leg and blood was flowing 7.
out. She might have hit by a car. He dialled 120 and called an ambulance8.
while waited for it, then he put the girl in the recovery position by 9.
roll her onto one side and placing her left upper arm under her chin. 10.
It was snowing heavy on Monday morning. Li Hua was at 1.
the bus stop, waited for Bus No.601 to go to school. After a 2.
while a bus came and she got on it. There had many passengers 3.
in the bus. Some were talking and some were looking out the 4.
windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. A driver turned around 5.
and said“Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off 6.
and help push the bus.”When he heard this, Li Hua and the other 7.
passengers got off the bus. They worked hardly together, pushing 8.
the bus slowly forward. Soon the bus was running again. All 9.
the passengers were smiling but the sun was shining. 10.