英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小短文为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修改。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧ ),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
3.必须按答题要求做题。否则不给分。
The Mid-autumn Festival, that is one important traditional festival in China,
falls in August 15th of the lunar calendar every year. It was celebrated both in China
and many Asian country. People believe that a full of moon is the symbol of reunion and
good luck. This is also a custom to express best wishes to their beloved ones at this
particularly time. On that day they usually go back home to have a family get-together,
so they appreciate the beautiful full moon, enjoyed the typical food—the moon cake.
All Chinese have wonderful time at the festival.
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In recently years many young people prefer to go shopping on the Internet. People have different opinion about online shopping. Some think online shopping was more convenient and the goods are cheap. However, others believe it is unsafe to buy goods in credit card. And it is possible to check the quality of the goods.
As far as I am concern, going shopping in a store is a better way. It is a fun walking around stores and look at various goods on sale. We can choose that we really need and even find a good bargain. Besides, we can chat with the shop assistant and acquire a lot of useful information.
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Dear editor,
I am a high school student. A few days before,one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school. He said that he wanted to start his own business. I tried my best to get him change his mind, but failed. I know it is difficult of him to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies, yet I want to insist that I give it a try. The process is important than the results. Now there are only 90 days leaving before the test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.
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I happen to meet some American tourists at gate of the Summer Palace last week. I
greeted them with English and then we began to chat. I got to know they were college
student traveling in China. Most of us were fond of Chinese medicine. They were busy
taking pictures and were surprising at the changes that had taken place in the past few years. After that, we went boat and had a good time. We were exchanged our e-mail
addresses such that we could write to each other in the future. They thanked me again
and again. I was gladly to have a chance to practice my oral English.
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例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was theam ![]() on |
Sports and games are very useful for character training. In their lessons at the school, boys and girls may learn about such virtues like unselfishness, courage, discipline and love of one’s country. So what is learned in books cannot have the same deep effect on child’s character as what is learned by experience. As most of the pupils’ time is spent in classes study lessons, the ordinary day school can’t give many practical training for their lives in the future. So it is how the pupils do in the spare time that really prepare them to take their places in society as citizens when they grow up. Unless each of them learns to work for his team, and not for himself on the football field, he will later find it naturally to work for the good of his country instead only for his own benefit.
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Dear sir,
Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a men to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.
Customer
Li Ming