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Dear Brad ,
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school . I feel uneasily recently . At home I feel like prisoner . I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet . The only thing I have to do it is studying . Every time I got a low mark , my parents will scold me sharply . There's a generation gap among my parents and me , but it's always difficult to communicate . Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful , isn't it ? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university ? I am very unhappy and lost . I need your help .
Best wishes ,
Li Ping

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
About 70 million American are trying to lose weight. That’s almost one out of three in United States. Some ate less of certain foods, especial fat and sugar.
Others exercise, take medicine or even have operations. Losing a weight is not easy, and it can also cost lots of money. And why do many people in the US want lose weight? Many people worry for not looking young and pretty. Other people worry about health. Many doctors say putting on too much weight are not healthy. Almost 30 million people weigh at least 20 percent much than their usual weight.

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧ ), 并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
As far as I know, time is not always enough all of us. So first of all, you need to arrange your time good. You’d better to make a long-term study plan. That is to say, an one-month plan with more efforts to take up his weak subjects. And a short-term plan is equal necessary, if not more important. You have to make sure what you need to do each day, each class or even each minute. At the same time, it’s quite essential to keeping healthy. So take exercise for at least one hour and sleep for no less than seven hour a day. And don’t forget to eat well. More fruit was always right for you.

假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
In my hometown there was a river. Many students go and swim there,
so my parents don’t allow me to do that. They consider swimming
dangerous because of I am very thin and weak. They are afraid
they may drown. One afternoon, my friend and I went out to play.
They played in the river happy while I just stood in the bank.
I really wanted to join them. At last, one friend offered to teach
me where to swim. After half hour, to my surprise, I could swim.
I was exciting.

假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Though great progress have been made in science these years, there are still many people live in poor
conditions. They make a living by collecting or selling used things. Their children cannot go to school
because they had not enough money to send their children there. How do you think so many people still
suffer from poverty now? The answer lies the population explosion. A president of a developing country
once said, “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because of we used to ‘produce’ children without
limit. Although this few words sound simple enough, they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the
population explosion.