改错(满分10分)
Dear sir,
I graduated this year and wanted to get a work. I thought I would be success, but finally I 
failed. That was why I was so lazy that I didn’t want to go out. I always complained for the hot 
weather. And there was another reason nobody know about: I regarded myself someone who 
couldn’t do anything lonely. I often felt less capably than others. When I found a company that was 
advertising, I was even afraid to call to ask for details. I wanted to make a move, and I was always 
disappointed. What should I do? I’m looking forward to receive your reply.                                                                                                                                                                    
 Yours
Li Ming
My neighbor’s children love playing hide-and-seek as other children do ,but everybody had imagined that the game they played themselves last week would be reported in the local newspaper. One afternoon, they are playing at the street comer. Paul, only five year old, hid and locked himself in a storage mailbox in accident His sister, Nancy, heard his cries and realized what had happened, so she immediately asked a mailman open the metal door. Paul was free ,but he had such bad a scare that he could not stop cry. The mailman told him that next time he wanted to hide in a mail box, he should remember to put the stamp on himself. When he heard that ,Paul burst into laughing.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
 删除: 把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
 修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
  2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
 There are many different signs in the public. They tell you what to do or what not to do in a place. Do you know what they exact mean? For example, if you go to see a film, you should enter the cinema at the ENTRANCE and leave for the EXIT. You will either find NO SMOKING signs in many cinemas. If you visit a museum, don’t take some photos inside the halls. You are not allowed. You will find NO PHOTOS signs in many museum. When you drive a car, don’t park in a street without a NO PARKING sign. Making sure you understood the signs and you won’t get into any trouble.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
 增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该词。
 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
 修改:在错的词下划一横线(),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
 注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
 One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it with rice and water. Under their treatment and care, the lucky birds got recovered soon. When time came for them fly the bird back to nature, they felt a bit pity but very delighting. 
 I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respect to nature. Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along good with it.
下面短文中有10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个的单词。
 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
 删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
  2.只允许修改10 处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
 例如:
 I remember how I used to playing outside with my friends during my childhood. We always had a great fun. We played many games in them we had to use our imagination. Playing those games, we learned how to compete, organize groups and be creating. We made up of many games that didn't have to be played with specific toys. Now, the situation is differently. Children are still playing, and instead of playing outdoors, they are playing indoors with high-tech toys. This mean they are staying inside the house all the times, and usually in front of a TV. So they are becoming more lonely and making less friends.
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.