第二卷写作
第四题：短文改错。（按格式去改，每题1分，共10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Lily,
Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday 76_____
party on Sunday. I’d like very much go but 77_____
I’ll have an examination in Monday morning. 78_____
It is very important but I can’t afford to fail 79_____
it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading 80_____
and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that 81_____
I won’t be able to come this time. I hope you 82_____
can understand me. I’ll take this chance to wish 83_____
you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy 84_____
birthday, Lily, and many return of the day. 85_____
（四）
The Huaihe River has been serious polluted. Day and night 76.______
millions of tons of waste water is being poured down to it from 77.______
hundreds of factories. The waste water is harmful. At present 78.______
there is no fish in it. The river water cannot be drunk. People in 79.______
either bank have to dig wells to take drinking water. The Huaihe 80.______
River is such dirty and poisonous that people don't dare swim 81.______
in it. Something must be done to stopping the pollution. The 82.______
government and the people near the river must try to clear water 83.______
as soon as possible. Now special attention has paid to the 84.______
pollution by the government and more scientists. The pollution 85.______
will be prevented in the near future.
（二）
Nowadays, almost every family has TV set, and almost 76．_______
everyone likes watching TV. TV has become part of our lives. 77．_______
TV has many advantages, for example, it informs us the 78．_______
latest news which is happening in the world; it can open our 79．_______
eyes, enlarge our knowledge and also help us to see more 80．_______
about the world． But, it also has some disadvantages. People 81．______
waste too much time in watching TV and his normal life 82．_______
and work are affected． To the children who they spend too 83．_______
much time in watching TV, it can do harmful to their sight 84．_______
and healthy. So we should control the time of watching TV. 85．_______
（五）
Dear Abby,
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. 76._______
I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77._______
further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam 78._______
for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, 79._______
my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me 80._______
going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81._______
for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They 82._______
can't imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study 83._______
in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with 84._______
them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up? 85._______
Best wishes,
Jane
（三）
A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took 76._______
part in a college course in French. Since I have learned 77._______
to say German well in Germany, I thought it might be 78._______
interested to begin studying another language. At the 79._______
first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation 80._______
exercise in it he would say a word or two in French, and 81._______
each student would do their best to copy. When he got to 82._______
me, he kept having me to say more words, and I 83._______
finally asked him why. "I find it great fun," she explained 84._______
it. "In 25 years of teaching at school, it's the first time 85._______
I've heard an American speak French with a German accent."
答案与简析：
76. famous前加上a。 （名词数）。 77. 正确 78. we前面加when，引导一个时间状语从句。（句子成分多分析） 79. them→us （逻辑错误须关注） 80. visiting→visited（非谓动词细辨别） 81. picture→pictures（名词数） 82. passes→passed（动词形） 83. 去掉down（习惯用法要记住） 84. and→but（but, and, or和so） 85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析 / 习惯用法要记住）。
(一)
Most families in China hoped their single children will 76．_______
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 77．_______
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 78．_______
homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 79．_______
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 80．_______
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 81．_______
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 82．_______
already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 83．_______
Shouldn't we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 84．_______
government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 85．_______