第二卷（共35分）第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节-优题课

短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
短文中共有10处语言错误，每句话最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词;
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Australian bio-geneticist James Dale visited Uganda, a poor African country, in early 2000s. There, he found that 15-30 percent of children under 5 was at risk of going blind because of they did not get enough Vitamin A. Dale also learned that people there love bananas. They eat three to eleven bananas a day. So he came out with the idea to plant bananas containing added nutritions. He believed that these bananas could improve Ugandan’s healthy. Under the help of Bill Gates’ foundation, in 2014, Dale developed the “super banana”. He added a gene to the fruit, thus made it rich of Vitamin A. In June, “super banana” begins human trials in the US. This invention has helped to make the world better.

短文改错(每小题1分，满分10分)
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I believe that everybody can cook themselves something well to eat.Cook is actual a lot easier than most of we think.Last Sunday my parents were away in business.I was left alone at home with no one to cook for me.So I had a good chance to cook myself wonderful meal.Early in the morning I went to the market, bought some beef and tomato and then came back.Before cooking, I put some oil, salt and a little pepper on the beef but mixed them together.When the pan was hot enough, I begin to fry the beef.Then I cooked some tomato soup.The food was tasted delicious!

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
English is now international language.It is used in many aspects.When we do businesses with foreigners, we often speak English.When we want to learn anything about other countries, we read books in English for more and more books are printing in it.But how could we learn from English well? Most important of all, I think, is that we should be interested in it, but we should go all out to listen, speak, read and write.Beside, we should practice using it whenever possibly.In class you should answer questions actively.After class we should talk with our classmates.

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处
语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改1 0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was excited when I hear that our community was to have its own McDonald’s restaurant. I thought about all those young people whom would not have to go to the next town to buy its favorite burgers and chips. McDonald’s cares about health eating too and works with scientists to provide food that is high quality, safe and healthy. They often provide salads as good as burgers and chops. You can also choose between cola with milk shakes. Of course it also means more work for our area that need jobs badly. McDonald’s says they are interested in doing what is right for the community and being good neighbor. So I think they will be concerned about provide parking for the cars in our main street.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Matt was walking in the forest near his village while he smelled smoke and saw a fire that was out of the control. Many trees have already been burned. He looked at the black ground and saw a green snake, that was trapped under a large tree. He knew the snake was in danger. He lifted up the falling tree, put the snake into a bag and ran back to his village.
He showed his mother the beautiful snake and begged her to let him keeping it. He fed the snake on mice and gave them a huge area in their yard to live. The snake lived a very comfortably life. He also invited one of his best friend to feed it. Both of them liked the snake very much.