五.写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节:短文改错（共10小题；-优题课

文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Mr. Black, aging 50, is working in a factory in Beijing as an specialist. After he graduated from Beijing University in 1984, he sent to Columbia University to study genetic engineering. Through her hard work for 4 years, he achieved remarkably results in scientific research. But he received a doctor’s degree in 1992. An American company manager tried hard to invite him to work and promise to give him a good salary but he didn’t receive it. In 1993, he returned to China without any hesitations. He has made up of his mind to devote all his life to our country.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在该行右面横线上写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。并在该行右面横线上写出该词，并用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右面横线上写出改正后的词。
His parents tried to keep him from smoke but failed._______
I just took for granted that he’d always be around. _______
The experienced curator has been in the charge of the largest library in the city for many years. _______
I look forward to hear from you soon. _______
What you said just now doesn’t make a sense. _______
He would rather cooperate than to compete with others. _______
The old man suffered of cancer and had to have radio therapy. _______
They felt exhausting after a whole day’s hard work. _______
We are here to provide a good service to the public. _______
Study hard at English or you will make progress. _______

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
John, a little boy living next door to me, liked fast food very much. His parents was so busy that they had a little time to cook for him at home. So they often took him eat fast food. That's because John became overweight. My mother had always told his parents that too much fast food was harmful, and they ignored my mother's advices. Recently, the doctor warned him never to eat fast food any more after the poor boy has a physical examination. Her parents came to realize what a terribly mistake they had made. Now John's mother often comes to ask my mother for advice in how to make healthy food.

本文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good morning, everyone. It’s great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy-going, get along well with my classmates.
It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.
I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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Last night, I have a strange but interesting dream. On the way back home. I came across child from another planet. His clothes seemed to be shining and looked beautifully. As I got close to him, he looked frightening and turned his back to me. Though I couldn’t speak his language, I used hand gestures to talk about him. A while later, he told me lots of amazing thing on his planet, which made me laughing, but suddenly, he began to cry, and then he explained he had lost his way but couldn’t find his home. Seeing that, I was offered to help him. His home had a telephone number like ours, so I asked him to call his parents using my phone. Soon before making the call he disappeared.