第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago．One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store．A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks．Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale．They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital．Docto
rs examined them but gave them some medicine．They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine．This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem．I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety．
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a high school student, I like to talk with foreigners to practise my oral English but learn more about other cultures. There were two foreign teachers in our school in this term. They often go to the English corner so that we can have a chance to practise a lang
uage. I seize every chance to talk them. However, I sometime find they are not so interestingin what I say, and it’s hard for I to choose a suitable topic. I would like some advices about howto communicate proper with foreigners, and what topics to pick.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During the summer holiday, I think I should do something meaningful instead touring. So I got a job in a fast food restaurant and worked there as cleaner. I worked seven hours a day. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless, that made me so tired tha
t I nearly stopped it halfway. After all, I stuck to it with determinations. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and went to home late in the evening. Finally, I finished the job after the new school term began. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really a successful experience, which is worthy remembering for ever.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tony,
Thank you for your letter. To tell you the truth, I’ve thought a lot of about whether you
should buy a laptop computer help you with your study. In my opinion, you’d better not. For
one reason, it’s very easy for you to develop some bad habit once you have it, such as playing
computer games, see movies and so on, which will be a waste of time. For other reason, buying a
laptop computer don’t mean you can study well. If you want to make a progress, you need to put
your heart into your study but work hard. Whether you had a computer or not is not the most
important. Do you agree to me? Looking forward to your reply!
Li Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处
错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Before Louis the Eleventh became king, he used to visiting a peasant where garden produced excellent fruit. After he takes office, the peasant brought him as a present a very large apple which had grown in his garden. The king, remembering the pleasant times that he had spent under the old man’s roof, gave him a thousand of crowns(25便士). The lord of the village, heard of this, thought that if one who gave a common apple received so large a reward, one giving a really valuable present would receive a much large reward. He, however, offered a splendid horse. The king accepted it and thinking of a big apple, said, “This cost me a lot of money; I now give to you in return for your horse.”
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Edison was a great scientist or inventor. As may not be known to many people, born in a
peasant families, he received few school education. He started to go to school at age of eight
and remain at school for only three months. It’s said that he always asked some strange
questions which his teachers couldn’t answer them. In fact, he was a man full with
imagination. He made over 2,000 inventions in his life, covered many fields, such as the
electric lamp, film, etc. He made an important contribution for the whole world, the social
develop and the progr
ess of human beings.