第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago．One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store．A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks．Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale．They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital．Docto
rs examined them but gave them some medicine．They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine．This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem．I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety．
文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our English club was set up two months ago．Now，we have members of 25．We met once a week on Saturday afternoon．So far，we have been conducted a variety of activities on English learning，such as watching English films，including a Christmas party and get together with the foreign students．Last week we held an English story－telling competition．We required that the entries would be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes．Every member took an actively part in it．Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judge．At last，LiBing won the first place．Many members said that the activity benefited them many ways．
Not only did it improve their speaking English，but also it brought them more fun．They hope many such activities can be held．
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划上一个（P）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一漏字符号（Λ），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Last Saturday, I wanted very much to see a film together with my brother after supper. On my wayto the cinema, we happen to meet an Americannamed Peter, who had lost his way, looked worried.When he told us that he wasn't able to findthe hotel, we decided take him there. When we wentto the hotel, we told of Peter the great changesthat had taken place in our country in the past few year, and he told us a lot of things about the youths in the U.S.A.Although my brother and I missed a interestingfilm, we felt very happily, for we had not only helpedPeter out of trouble and also learnt something from him.
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There are so much road accidents every day.They are often caused by carelessness. But thereare many rules that help to make the road safety.Here are some rules what we ought to know: In Hong Kongtraffic keeps to the left. Before across theroad, we must stop or look at both sides. Lookright; look left and look right again. If roadis clear, it is safe cross the road. Ifwe saw small children or very old persons,or blind people waited to cross the road, wecan help them to cross the road safely.
Do you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’dlike to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Everything just went wrongly. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring,since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt myhand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the houseto catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, youmay laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scaredas well because teacher hates the students coming late to school.So I ran three miles to school only to found that nobodywas there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom waslocked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday
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Two years ago my friend Lisa bought expensive mountain bike,that I liked very much. So she tried to persuade me to buy one,but I can’t afford it. From then on,I had been dreaming aboutbuy one. A week ago, my dream finallywas came true. Then Lisa and I were determined totake a great bike trip.It was the Mekong River where we wanted tocycle along. Lisa was stubborn. Although shedidn’t know the best way getting to places ,she insisted thatwe began our journey from the source of theRiver.I know Lisa well. Once she has made up her mind, something canchange it.Finally, I had to give in.