第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
Dear Mark,
It’s pity you can’t go over your lessons with us. We will take the English finally exam next Thursday, which is also the last day of the exam week. This is different about the exam is that it consisted of two parts, that is, answering three of the five questions and writing articles. We are supposing to go over our mid-term exam papers, textbooks and class notes to prepare from it. The grade is made up of three part. The final exam will make up of 55% of our final grade, the reach work 20% and the mid-term 25%. Please feel free to contact me unless you are still not clear about it. I hope you will recover soon or get a good mark in the exam.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
A British woman was caught on camera dumped a cat into a rubbish bin. Mary Bale, the 45-year-old bank worker, is now accused of causing unnecessary suffering to the animal, as well as failing to provide for the cat with a suitable environment. Bale will appear before magistrates（地方官员）in Coventry, central England, in October 19, 2010 to answer the charges. Both offence can carry a prison sentence and a lifetime ban from keeping animals. The cat, Lola, believed to have been stuck in the plastic bin for 15 hours until her owners Darryl and Stephanie Mann hear her miaowing（喵喵叫）. They found out that happened after checking footage from a camera she had installed at their house. The video was then posted on the video sharing site YouTube but a campaign was launched with some contributors making death threats against Bale.
文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词;
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
“Growing pains” is my favorite American TV play because it is very interested. The play tells humorous stories happen in Green’s family. With such stories it make people think about life, but therefore attracts the audience. It is also a window which we can learn about American society. And there were many meaningful things that are worth think of, such as the relationship between parents and children in many American family. It is quite different from those in China. The play is very popular. We’d better not missing the chance to enjoy it.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出增加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
Welcome to our English Corner. It set up four years before. Since then many high school students have joined in it. Students from different school gather round here every Sunday morning, and there are also some college students or foreigners. We talked about everything we are interested in. We also exchange our effective experience in English study. We think we have learned much here. It is a really addition to our English class and it is popular in students. And it is supporting by parents and teachers. They all
believe it is in great help to students. If you want to know much about it , you may talk to the students here.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画上一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行少一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线写出该加的词。
此行错一个词: 在错的词下面画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Before lunch Allen happened to see a man fished in________
a ditch about five metre outside a bar. Allen stopped_______
curiously. All people passing over the man who was fishing_______
regarded him like a foolish man. Allen’s heart went out______
of him. He said kindly to fish-catcher, “Hello, will_______
you please do me a favor and have a drink with me________
in the bar?” The man gladly received his invitation.____
After buying the man several cups soft-drinks,________
Allen asked, “You are fishing there, right? May I________
know how much fish you have caught this morning?”______
“You are the number 8,” said the man humorously.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，每行都有一处错。按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边番号后面横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边番号后面横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词；在错词下划一根线，在该行右边番号后面横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请按要求规范答题，否则不予给分。
| Today, roller-skating is easy and fun, and a long time |
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| ago, it isn’t easy at all. The idea of skating didn’t exist |
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| until 1750.It changed because a man named Merlin. |
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| One day Merlin received an invitation to attending a party. |
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| She was very pleased and excited. As the day of the party |
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| came nearly, Merlin began to think how to make a |
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| special show at the party. He had the idea. He thought he |
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| would get a lot of attentions if he could skate into the room. |
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| On the night of the party Merlin had rolled into the room |
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| playing his violin. Everyone was surprising to see him. |