五、写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Li Ming,
I have received your letter just now. Don't worry about me. 76.______
I'm getting on well with my research works in the lab. But, 77.______
to my surprise, you say you will give up learn English. 78.______
The reason is that you have not done well in it recent 79.______
and you have lost interesting, I'm afraid I can't agree with 80.______
you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English 81.______
is widely used in the world today and it will be important 82.______
tool in your future work.Except, it is becoming more 83.______
and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, and 84.______
you will succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there 85.______
is a way, I'm looking forward to hearing good news from you.
Yours LiuDong
There are advantage for students to work while 1.
studying at school.One of them was that 2.
they can earn money.For the most part, 3.
students working to earn money for their own 4.
use.Earning their own money allow them 5.
to spend on anything as if they please. 6.
They would have to ask their parents for 7.
money or for permission to do things by 8.
the money.Some students may also to save 9.
up for our college or future use. 10.
One evening two young men were walking in the street.
They tried to find a chance to steal everything.The clock 1.
struck twelve.Most people were in the bed.Quickly they came 2.
to a house so it seemed that everyone in the house had fallen 3.
sleep.Standing at the front gate,one man said in English to 4.
the other at a low voice,“You wait here.I will go around to 5.
the back door and then got into the house.” Suddenly out 6.
of the house ran a dog,barking at them.The two men were 7.
very afraid and ran away as fast as possibly.They didn’t stop 8.
until they had got to a lonely place.One man said to the other 9.
in surprise,“It’s too bad.I had thought that the dog could 10.
understand English.”
During the summer of 2009,I started reading books
in English,mostly stories.I would learn a lot of new 1.
words from these books,but I had terribly problems 2.
memorizing them.I had to look up to the same word 3.
many times,for which was quite troublesome.I realized 4.
I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary.It was 5.
a great achievement for myself.I started writing down 6.
words from books that I read.I would come back from 7.
school,and then sit for an hour and two.I wrote down 8.
new words and added it to my collection.By the end 9.
of last year,my collection has grown to 3 000 words. 10.
When a young man starts to earn his own living,he
can no longer expect others to pay his food,his clothes, 1.
or his room,but he has to work till he wants to live 2.
comfortable.If he spends most of his time playing 3.
about in the way that he used to as a child,they will go 4.
hungry.And if he breaks the laws of society that he used 5.
to break the laws of his parents,he may go to the prison. 6.
If,therefore,he works hard,keeps out of trouble and has 7.
better health,he can have the great happiness of seeing 8.
himself to make steady progress in his job and of 9.
building up for himself his own position in society. 10.
The Problem with Television
Now I can’t watch much television but a few years ago, 1.
I was used to watch it every night.I was often 2.
a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV 3.
demands very little effort.Unfortunate,there are 4.
too many people among my family.Some wanted 5.
to see the programme while others preferred 6.
another.I am happy with any programme but 7.
the others spent a lot time arguing and there 8.
was no way of settling the matter except by 9.
selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead. 10.