第二卷
写作(共两节,,满分35分)
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下画一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.
He did not want share things with other people. For 76. _________
example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 77. _________
in a secret place that I couldn’t find. Then he 78. _________
ate it all by himself. He never helped other. 79. _________
He said he is busy. That is, a game of 80. _________
tennis making him very busy. He did not care 81. _________
if something he did makes people angry. For 82. _________
instance, on one night he played strong and 83. _________
loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But 84. _________
he is difference now. He often helps grandma with 85. _________
housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates
with their lessons.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改: 在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者从第11处不计分。
Among the lesson I had in my schooldays, the one given by an American is the most unforgettably. One morning, our teacher told us he had been invited an American to give us a lesson. Then a man came in. He introduced himself with English and began his class. It was different from those classes they had before. He told many funny jokes, teaching us English songs and helped us act out dialogues. He neither taught us English grammar or asked us to do written exercises. He was not serious and was always smiling us. Time went quickly and after we knew it, the class was over. I will never forget his smile and everything he does in class.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改: 在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者从第11处不计分。
One day, Tom was riding along the street while suddenly a red car ran towards him fast. He is so frightened that he quick turned to the left side. But it was too late, the car knocked his bike and he fell of it. When the driver realized that he had caused an accident, he got such frightened that he escaped hurriedly. He was soon out of sight, left Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a passer-by happened to see what had been happened and took down a number of the car. He reported that to the police, but the driver was caught.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改: 在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者从第11处不计分。
Fang Tong, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theatre, who is 34 years old. Most of his students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at an age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. So art is always changing and developing.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改: 在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者从第11处不计分。
Dear Editor,
I'm a middle school student naming Lily. I'm writing to tell you something I don't think it good. Recently I've noticed many of my classmates often went to the Internet bar near our school. The other day I went there, too. I was very surprising to see many students playing games, seeing films and chatting. Some were even talking about love affairs on-line. In my opinion, an Internet bar should be a place which we can find much useful information. As is known to all that the Internet is a window to an outside world rather than a place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use it. Otherwise, it will do us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make sure that the students use Internet bars positively.
下面短文中共有10处错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改H)处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The zoo has big basket for rubbish. People can throw waste into them. On the Saturday afternoons there are usually a lot of people around the cages which the lovely animals are kept, and last Saturday nobody was there. Mr. Patties was surprised. But he was even much surprised to see few children around the basket near the tiger's cage. He quickly went up and looked at their heads and saw a little rat run about in the basket and looking for food. The rat afraid and the children were more interested in the rat than the tigers. How a lovely scene!