第二卷(共35分)
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Jianhua,
I’m very glad to have received a letter you sent me two 76.
weeks ago. I had been thinking about the question you asked 77.
me. In my opinion, you should go back here after you finish 78.
your studies in abroad. For one reason, what you are studying 79.
is badly needed nowadays in China. That will be quite easy 80.
for you to find a good job. As a matter of fact, I know a little 81.
big companies in our city hopes to hire people like you. For 82.
another reasons, I think it will be much more convenient for 83.
you to look your parents as they are getting old, so I think it’s 84.
a good idea for you to return back. So what are you waiting for? 85.
Best wishes,
Minghua
文中共有10处错误，涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧ )，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ＼ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
My parents have decided to taking me to Britain for a visit．I am excited, hoping to make good use this opportunity．Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can to improve my English．Secondly, there were many attractions that interests me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, which it is popular in England, is my favorite sport．I have been dreaming of watching a living football match there but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London．I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time．
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m very much glad to hear that your shopping centre will build non-smoking supermarket. In my opinion, it’s a good idea to do so, for it can not only help the smokers to smoke less, and it can also do good to other customers’ health. Since you had given up selling cigarettes, the customers don’t like smoking are sure to support you. In addition, smoke in the shopping centre may cause fire, which is dangerous to both your possessions and the safe of the customers. In a word, the non-smoking supermarket will not effect your business. To the contrary, it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health.
Best wishes!
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today my family went on an outing to Tai Po . I rode bike with my sister .We felt excitedly . Mum and Dad had a picnic . Mum makes some sandwiches.They were delicious ! We ate a lot and were full . Since that we flew a kite . My sister ran and fell down .She cried loudly and noisily .Mum and Dad was upset . So I told my sister , “ I fell down when I was four but I didn’t cry . Now you are six year old . Why are you crying ? ” My sister was angry to hear for that . She cried louder and louder .So Dad told to her a joke . Then he laughed . Mum and I were happy , too. How a wonderful day !
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.
It is reported, some needy students receive financial support from some kind people but never express our thanks. Personally, I think they are wrong. Though the helpers didn't expect any reward in return, it is necessary and good manner to say “thank you”. Besides, it is a basic social skill express ourselves in modern society. Maybe some of them do feel thankfully. It is only because they are afraid of looked down upon which they remain silent. But I just want to say that being poor for a moment doesn't means you will be poor forever.