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文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Of all my teachers, Mr. Brown is the one who impresses me mostly. Mr. Brown teaches us physics. Though he is in late forties, he looks very young for his age. And he is one of the most popular teachers in our school. Comparing with other teachers, he pays much attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think of ourselves whenever he puts forward some questions. Under his help, we’ve learned how to analyze and settle physical problems. How a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to! He is so inspiring a teacher that we all admire.
Dear John,
Last summer I take a parttime job in the International 1.
Camp for children.I have been told one more worker 2.
will be needed this year and I think you are fit it.How 3.
about join us?The camp is at the foot of a small hill 4.
close to a river.It is so a beautiful place!We can hear 5.
birds singing happy all around.Everybody sleeps in 6.
tents,that is very exciting.We usually work only five 7.
hours a day,so we will have plenty of spare time visit the 8.
area and have a fun.I am sure it will be an unforgettable 9.
experience.If you have interests in it,reply to me soon. 10.
Yours,
Li Ping
Dear Mr Smith,
Thank you very much for invite me to go and stay with 1.
you in Nanjing.It’s the most beautiful city,and I have been 2.
eager to see you again.So I’m very sorry to tell you that I can’t 3.
go this summer vacation,since I’ve already been promised 4.
to stay with my grandmother in the countryside.She has 5.
already 65 years old and miss me so much that I have no choice 6.
but do it.I’m busy preparing for my college entrance exams 7.
all these days and I feel quite sure of myself.I wish I can go, 8.
and see you and Tom at the end this year. 9.
Best wishes to both you and Tom! 10.
Yours sincerely,
Song Ping
Anne lives in a small town.She is fond of
surfing the Internet.In general speaking,she 1.
spent about an hour a day on line.To her,it is 2.
a wonderful place because you never know that 3.
it may have in store for you.Last Friday,she 4.
found an e-pal,that called himself “Future”. 5.
They promised to keep touch with each other. 6.
And she was warned against him by her parents. 7.
“What will it lead to?” she asked.“A happy ending,” 8.
Anne answered and continued typing,paid no 9.
attention to them.One month past,and a man 10.
called “Future” was arrested by the police!
“CATS”,the greatest musical in the world,went to Beijing at last! 1.
As a big fan of the show,I bought a ticket quite early and looking forward 2.
to it for weeks.It was going to be the happiest day of my life,and there 3.
was other performance I had not expected.My mum and I arrived at the 4.
Great Hall of the People ahead of the time,and found our seats on the 5.
second floor.The good designed stage,a huge rubbish dump for cats, 6.
caught the attention the moment I sat down.The show was about to begin 7.
and I was expecting a brilliant musical.So it was said that all the tickets had 8.
sold out long ago,to my surprise nearly a third of the seats were still empty . 9.
But as soon as the music began,its magical power brought my eyes back 10.
to the stage.
The day before the speech contest(比赛)English teacher 1.
talked to me.She said that she and my schoolmate all 2.
wished me success,but it didn’t matter that I would 3.
win or not.When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so 4.
nervous as I shook like a leaf.There were so many people 5.
present.Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in 6.
the crowd.She was smiling but nodding at me.I remembered 7.
her words and calmdown.I did a good job and won the first 8.
prize.Now my picture and theprize is hanging in the library. 9.
Whenever I see them I will often think ofmy English teacher. 10.