短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
Dear Brown,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river. It is such beautiful a place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.
Yours,
Mary
Last Sunday morning when I got up, to me great surprise, 1.___________
I found that we had a big snowfall. I was very excited because 2.___________
it was a long time that I had ever seen such a heavy snowfall. 3.___________
So I decided to call my friends to go out to play snow together. 4.___________
We made up some snowmen and rolled some snowballs 5.___________
and we enjoyed the fun of playing fighting games. Just then 6.___________
we noticed that the buses and cars move very slowly 7.___________
because the heavy snow. So we went to clean the snow so as to 8.___________
help the traffic go safely. After the all morning’s hard work, 9.___________
we cleaned the snows on the road, and we went home happily. 10.___________
One day, did not feeling well, Mr. Smith went to the hospital 1.____________
to have him examined. When he was given the test report, 2.____________
he was greatly shocked. “Am I dying?” He immediately 3.____________
was felt very ill. Filled with sadness, he went back home,4.____________
taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will. “Maybe 5.____________
a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and 6.____________
went to the hospital to have more examination. To his 7.____________
great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t 8.____________
have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful. 9.____________
Mr. Smith went out for his favourite sport happily rather sadly. 10.___________
Yang Liwei was born from an ordinary family in Liaoning 1.____________
Province in 1965. He became the pilot in Chinese Air Force 2.____________
in 1987, spend 1,350 hours in the air. He has spent 5 years 3.____________
training to become a spaceman. He sent into space at 9 a.m on 4.____________
October 15th by China’s Shenzhou V spacecraft, that orbited 5.____________
the earth 14 times. He landed safe at 6:23 a.m the next day, 6.____________
making China the third country successfully sending a person 7.____________
into space before the former Soviet Union and the USA. 8.____________
Yang Liwei comes back to the earth after a 21-hour trip 9.____________
to space. In space Yang recorded to everything he saw and 10.___________
showed China’s national flag to the people watching on TV.
I like travel very much. I had been to most 1.___________
of the interested places in Britain already and I just 2.___________
don’t want other cold English summer. So I’ll go 3.___________
abroad for change this year. Where I’d like 4.___________
to is France, Spain, or Italy. Though going abroad 5.___________
has the trouble of changing money abroad. But 6.___________
when I just think of the sun I’d enjoy for, the new 7.___________
places I’d see, the people I’d meet, I get excited. 8.___________
In fact, which I’d really like to do is to practice my 9.___________
French and Spanish. It would do me a lot at work. 10.___________
Today is Sunday, The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. 1.___________
At about 9:00a.m, I go to the bookstore with my friends, there 2.___________
was a lot of new books, I didn’t know which one to buy, because 3.___________
these books were all useful to me. At last, I chose two. 4.___________
At 10:00, we went to the cinema, the film calling Titanic was 5.___________
very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the 6.___________
film, and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even 7.___________
burst out tears. From the story, I understand that love is noble 8.___________
and valuable. That’s a really wonderful film, It is very worth 9.___________
seeing again.
What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy! 10.____________