第二卷
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10题，每题1分，共10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Through some efforts, the rescuers cleaned up the ruin carefully which was covered
the mother. Under her body lying her baby. The baby was in small red quilt with
yellow flowers. He was about 3or 4 months old. Since the baby is well protected by his
mother’s body, he was total safe. He was sleeping well when the rescuer carried her
out, and his lovely and peaceful face warmed anyone around him. The rescuer found
there was a mobile phone in the quilt. When he looked at the screen, the massage was
already there.”My dear baby, if you can live, don’t forget how many I love you.” Eve-
ryone who saw this massage burst into tears.
Nick is a 28-year-old Australian man, which life is very difficult because he born without arms or legs. Some people used to make fun of him and said he looked like a monster. Doing normal things seemed impossibly to him. However, Nick never gave up, and after many failures, he finally learn to swim, fish and even surf. Most surprising, he completed university and earned the two degrees. Now he is the CEO of two company.
When asking about the secret of his success, Nick’s answer is: Attitude is altitude. To him, nothing is impossible if you has enough determination to overcome difficulties. He thinks a positive attitude is the key of success.
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help the others. One day on his way school, he saw a little girl crosses the road. A car was coming towards to her quickly and the girl was so frightened to move. The car near hit her. Just then Liu Kai rushed up to her and caught her on the arm. The little girl was saved. She tells him where she lived, but he took her home. When Liu Kai hurried into the classroom, the teacher has already begun his lessons. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for which he had done.
Yang Li, a five-year-old girl living next door to me, very clever. Because she is not old enough to go to the school, she often asks me to teach herself to read, write and draw. She studies hardly and soon she learns a lot. One evening last month I was doing my English homeworks when she came to my house. She asked me how I learned English. “You would find English a bridge for so much knowledge,” I said. She then wanted to learn English, either. She has learned many English words so far but her parents are very grateful to me.
This afternoon I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I am wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can help others in return for. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.
We are going to take the College Entrance Exams in about sixteen days. Therefore, many students still don’t know what to balance their study, rest and physical exercises while prepared for the Exams. They usually devote too much time to go over their lessons, what results in a poor health and low efficiency of learning.
As the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise make a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We’d better leave us enough time to rest and sleep since it enables us to learn our lessons more efficient. What’s more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study, future work and creative activities.
In brief, as we are preparing for the Exams, don’t forget that rest, exercise and study were equally important.