第二卷
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10题，每题1分，共10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Through some efforts, the rescuers cleaned up the ruin carefully which was covered
the mother. Under her body lying her baby. The baby was in small red quilt with
yellow flowers. He was about 3or 4 months old. Since the baby is well protected by his
mother’s body, he was total safe. He was sleeping well when the rescuer carried her
out, and his lovely and peaceful face warmed anyone around him. The rescuer found
there was a mobile phone in the quilt. When he looked at the screen, the massage was
already there.”My dear baby, if you can live, don’t forget how many I love you.” Eve-
ryone who saw this massage burst into tears.
Should students make friends on line?some people think the Internet help make 1.______
many friends .Chatting online ,students can express his feelings 2.______
and opinions more freely ,and even get help at their foreign 3.______
language studies Others ,therefore ,think students should not . 4.______
They say making friends online is waste of time ,5.______
which should be spent more meaningfully on study . 6.______
Besides ,some students get cheat on line . 7.______
It is my opinion whether students should place their study，8.______
health and safe before other things .9.______
After all ,we can find friend in our classmates.10.______
Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second half 1.______
of senior grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more 2.______
than three months before I graduate middle school. At 3.______
the present, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order to 4.______
take the college entrance examination. I hope to go to 5.______
Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not 6.______
only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best to turn 7.______
my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also 8.______
studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe everyone 9.______
will be able to enter a very good university and college. 10._____
Dear Sir,
I am university student．I once thought life at the 76．_________
university must be excellent, but now I had changed my mind． 77．_________
I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move 78．_________
into the dormitory．Last term, I got along peacefully and 79．_________
happy．But I find they are not willing to be with me now． 80．_________
They don’t talk with me, so they’ve become cold toward 81．_________
me．Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about what 82．_________
I felt like, but I failed to find an opening．When leaving 83．_________
alone, I am always recall this sadness．Why can’t I win true 84．_________
friendship? I’m lonely, and look forward to get your advice soon． 85．_________
Yours,
Peter
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误）则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行少一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在右边横线上写出所加的词。
该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。
注意：原行没错的不要改。
Dear classmates,
I’ll tell you everything about my future．Every one 76．
of us is thinking about the future．Do you know what 77．
yours is? I have decided to become a middle school teacher． 78．
Does it sound surprised? I had this dream when I was only a 79．
child．I love children．As we all know, when teachers are 80．
great needed in our country, especially in the countryside． 81．
Many parents expect their children to be well-educated, and 82．
they don’t want them to be teachers．One of the main reason 83．
is that teachers work too hard but get too little．In spite that, 84．
I’m determined to devote all my life to teach in my hometown． 85．
A married couple were in a car while the wife turned to 76．__________
her husband and asked, “Would you like to stop for coffee?” “No, 77．__________
thanks．” he answered truthfully．But they didn’t stop．However, 78．__________
the wife, who has indeed wanted to stop, became angry, because 79．_________
she felt her preference had not considered．The husband, seeing that 80．_________
his wife was angry, became frustrated．Why didn’t she just say that 81．_________
she wanted? Unfortunately, he failed in to see that his wife was 82．_________
asking the question, in order not to get an immediately decision, 83．_________
but rather to begin discussion．And the women didn’t realize that 84．_________
when her husband said no, he was just express his preference, not 85．_________
giving an order．