第II卷 第三部分:写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节:短文改错:(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分).
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
The long-desired winter vacation arrived in the end.As soon as the 86_______
bell rang,announced the end of the class,each student couldn't wait 87_______
to rush out of the classroom. Half an hour late, my good friend Li Ming 88_______
and I were on the way back home. Such crowded was the train 89_______
we took that we had to stand.Thinking the coming Spring Festival 90_______
and the two weeks' stay with parent, we both felt happy and gay.All 91_______
of a sudden,I saw a man picking a purse of an old lady’s pocket. 92_______
With the help of Li Ming,I caught the pickpocket and force him to give 93_______
back the purse to a lady.The thief was taken away by the guard. 94_______
Praised by other passengers,so we felt proud of what we had done. 95_______
短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
For most people, it is almost impossible to operate on a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenience in controlling the screen. Without the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit text, browse web pages and download that we want. It can even bring us a flood of musics, movies and PC games. Just imagining, all that can be done with a cute mouse.
A convenient tool can certain make our work easier, and it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves a little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking make us much lazier and less creative.
短文改错
Dear Brown,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have been told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you are interesting in it, reply to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited me to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city . Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.
单句改错(共5小题,每小题1分,共 5分。每句只能改一处,在原句中直接改正)Airhostessesallsmilewhentheyserve for thepassengers.
Noonematcheshimwhenit comestoswim.
A poornourished body needs more energy to combat disease.
Foreigners always associate China to the Great Wall.
Notuntilthenhe realizetheimportanceoftheproblem.
My wife and me spent two weeks in London last year. We went here in autumn. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End. It was convenient as we do most of our sightseeing on foot. Taxis was quite too expensive. We couldn’t understand the bus routes, but my wife didn’t like traveling by the underground. She said it made her to feel sick. We went to look at the places which all tourists see. We saw the Buckingham Palace. We came shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money. What we liked most, though, was going to theatre.