第二卷(共35分)
第三部分:写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该次,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Sir,
I am now a college student in Peking University. I' m 76. __________
quite interested in the position offering by your website 77. __________
for part-time English reporters. I think I' m fit the job. 78. ___________
As a student, I've read a lot and have many knowledge in 79. ___________
different field. I' m fond of English and do well in both 80. ___________
speaking and writing. Besides, I'm easily to get along 81. ___________
with and I enjoy working together with another. Above 82. ____________
all, I once work as a reporter for my college broadcast 83. ___________
station. So I' m sure I can do the job well if I will get 84. ___________
the chance to work for a website. I'm looking forward 85. ___________
to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
文章共有10处错误。每句最多两处。多者从第11处起不计分。
1.增加:缺词处加∧,并在下面写出该词。
2.删除:多余的词用╲划掉。
3.修改:错词下面划一横线,并在下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about her except that she was strange. She didn’t talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didn’t really want to get closest to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming's parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city.
Since then we haven't see each other much But we’ve kept writing to each other.
Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. Now listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going from house to house on the street so he wanted to introduce him to all his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell, and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, gently when it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m very exciting to learn that we will start a magazine together. That sounds great, and I definitely agree you on that.
Some of the columns what you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. “Cultural Express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since the people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each others. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “Blurt Out” is pretty good for Chinese student to learn English idioms and improving oral English. Last but not least, “Entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors or celebrities are so attractively that you absolutely can’t miss this part. Teenagers were just fond of popular things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read this magazine.
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many people standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd and I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give hand when someone else is in need.