VI. 短文改错
找出下面一段文章中的错处并改正。如该行缺一词，在文中缺词处标上“ ” ，并在相应的横线上写上正确的词语；如该行多一词，在文中用斜线划掉多余的词，并在相应的横线上写上该词，用斜线划去；如该行错一词，在文中用横线标出，再在相应的横线上写上正确的词语。如该行无错，在相应的横线上打上“ ” 。
示例：
Betty wants to be nurse and works with sick people a
who need her helps. help 
Last summer Betty had broke her leg. had 
The pain was very great and she couldn’t walk.
The telephone rang and I picked out the receiver(话筒). “Hello,” 69.____________
I said. “Hello,” said the voice. “Bill here, is Betty there?” 70.____________
“I’m sorry,” I said, “You have got the wrong number.” 71.____________
A few seconds late, the telephone rang again. Just 72.____________
as I expected he was Bill, “You have made a mistake again.” 73.____________
I explained. The telephone rang a third time. This made I 74.____________
angry. I speak in a big voice, “Hello, Bill, Betty here.” 75._____________
For a moment there was a dead silent. Then someone said, 76._____________
“What’s the wrong with you, Tom?” It was my mother. 77._____________
I could do anything but say sorry to my mother. 78_____________
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
I'm middle school student of sixteen. I have a 53．
weight problem. Some boys often make fun of me and were 54．
unfriendly to me. They call me “Meat Ball”, which make55．
me feel unhappily. I am now worried about my weight. 56．
Although I am a bit of too fat, I feel quite well. I 57．
enjoy my meal. I love eating meat very much. 58．
But I like sweet food, too. Now I am getting fatter and fatter. In 59．
the past two months, I have put on 5 kilos. I've got worried 60．
about this, but I don't know to lose weight quickly. 61．
Who can tell me the way of lose weight? 62．
例如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Fred and I haven’t much in common. I sometimes wonder that why we are friends
at all. Fred is always busy make things. Everything he makes is such perfect that I
always admired him for his skills. My trouble is that I’m one of those lazy peoples.
Outside my work at the office, the only thing which interests me is listen to music.
I have a big collection of records and all day along the only thing I can think is when
I’m going to get to home to listen to a new piece.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I won’t forget the 5-12 Earthquake for the rest of life.
When it strikes, I was alone sleeping. Suddenly I felt 76.
my bed shaking. I jumped out of it, and I couldn’t stand 77.
up because of the whole building seemed like it was moving 78.
back and forth. I so scared and felt hopeless. I felt myself 79.
very closely to God. And I thought that I was going to die. 80.
Second later the quake stopped and I rushed outside. But 81.
the scene I saw shocked me to death: The high rise besides 82.
mine had collapsed to the ground. I suffered for quite long 83.
time after that. I was in great pain. Now I’m feeling more 84.
better and I think I’ve walked out of the shadow of it and 85.
found the strength to move on.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it．She painted careful and her works were nice．She first painted only to please oneself, and then began to sell her works with a little money．In 1993, a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma Moses’ work hanging in a shop．He liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for less．Caldor held a show to introduce the works of Grandma Moses other artists．Grandma Moses, who was world-famous, was died on December 13, 1961, at the age of 101．
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误（每行只有一个错误），按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
My wife and I went to visit the town that we both 81._______
grew up last summer. We hadn't been to there for ten 82. _______
years. First we went to the place where my wife spends 83. _______
her childhood. People there asked us come into their houses 84. _______
and had a cup of coffee. Then we went to see my old 85. _______
neighbor. How a disappointment(失望)! It was all 86. _______
changed. All the old houses I remembered gone and 87. _______
their places were some very modern one. I didn't 88. ________
know some of the people who lived there. 89. _______
But they were friendly to us. We had very good time. 90. ________