第六节：短文改错（共1篇，10错误；满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Helen is one of my best friend. She had taught us English when I attended a training class two years before. Helen always made good preparations for the lessons, but she tried her best to make his class lively. I used to being poor in English, especially in writing English. But now I’m able to write E
nglish letters and reports correct. I still remember how she helped me for my English patiently. Teacher’s Day’s coming. I’m going to send to her a card and give her my best wishes.
文中共有10处错误，涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧ )，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ＼ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
My parents have decided to taking me to Britain for a visit．I am excited,hoping to make good use this opportunity．Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can to improve my English．Secondly, there were many attractions that interests me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, which it is popular in England, is my favorite sport．I have been dreaming of watching a living football match there but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London．I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time．
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的作文如下。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或者修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处)不计分。
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt. I quickly turned off the gases, opening all the window, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.
下列各句中均有一处错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均限一词。There is many trees in front of my house now.
Jack is always late with school.
After supper, we went to home.
Tom has already learnt two thousands English words until now.
It is believed that December 21st, 1891, the first basketball game in history was played.
Dear Jenny,
I’m so worried when I see that you’re not a little tired and nervous about the coming College Entrance Examination; Here is some advices to help you prepare the coming exam.
Have enough sleep, whatever much work you have to do，or you’ll feel sleepy on an
occasion in class. A balanced diet will certainly help a lot. Having more fresh fruit and
vegetables every day are good for you. Which you know, a proper method of learning will
enable you to learn more and faster. To get better results, that is wise to be attentive and make
every effort to gain knowledge. And you were supposed to review your notes taking down after
class every day. Always remember to stay happily and optimistic so that you can be energetic
while doing the revision. I hope you’ll no longer feel tired and nervous.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
Dear Editor.
I’m a middle school student named Li Hua. I’m writing tell you something. Recently I noticed that many of my schoolmates often go to the Internet bar near our school. The other day, I went there, either.I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, seeing movies or were chatting. Some students were even sending love letter online. In my opinion, Internet bar should be a place which we can find much usefully information. Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than a place for playing games. Internet is good unless we make good use of it. Otherwise, they will do us great harm. So the local government should take measures to make sure of the “safety” of students in the Internet bars.