假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This is a story told by my father : When I was boy , the most exciting thing was when to
celebrate the Spring Festival . My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes . Once , I just couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner . As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck , I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking me . Shake her head , she said , “It isn’t a good time to do that , dear .” I apologize and controlled me at the best till the dinner started . You know , that was a dinner we had waited for several month .
V .短文改错（共8小题；每小题1分，满分8分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
The English language has become a international language because86. ________
it is using by people in more countries than any other language. 87________
Now, unless you want to do business with foreigners, you must learn 88.________
English because most them speak and write in English. English is one 89.________
of the working language at international meetings. Today, most important 90.________
books were written in English. If you know English well, you can read 91. ________
newspapers and magazines in English and learn a lot of knowledge. 92. ________
You can also do that you can to make the world peaceful. 93. ________
English is very important to us, and many students don’t know why they94. ________
should learn it well. I hope all the students will pay more much attention to 95. ________
their English study from now on.
第二节短文改错（共10小题，每题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中有十处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加，删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Dear Dally,
Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节：短文改错(共10 小题，每题1分，满分10 分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，
在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，
并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Are the years you spent at school best years of you life?1.
Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting. We had to 2.
sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what the teachers 3.
were saying. They used to writing on the blackboard and ask4.
us difficult questions. We also had to do a plenty of homework, and 5.
hand it on time. We had to wear school uniforms and obey lots of6.
rules. I left school as soon as I can and started work. I read books 7.
at the public library, and late I decided to attend college. Now 8.
I really enjoy studying because I’m growing old and know what I9.
want it. When I was at school, I was just the wrong age!10.
第二节短文改错（共10小题，每题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中有十处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加，删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Dear Dally,
Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.
Yours,
Li Hua
第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节: 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
短文中有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下方写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
What should you do when your parents become angrily? If yourparents got mad, try to have a conversation with themabout it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usuallywill try to change. But they will take some times to change becausethey always get angry, and that is all they know. Youmight have to change for your method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your parents that they don’t expect— like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesn’t work, bring in friend that youfeel comfortable, and have him or her help you.