假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一个横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This is a story told by my father : When I was boy , the most exciting thing was when to
celebrate the Spring Festival . My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes . Once , I just couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner . As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck , I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking me . Shake her head , she said , “It isn’t a good time to do that , dear .” I apologize and controlled me at the best till the dinner started . You know , that was a dinner we had waited for several month .
短文改错(共l0小题;每小题l分,满分l0分)
文中有10处语言错误,每句中有最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
I’m glad to write to you. It is near a month since you had left our hospital. I’m still worried
about you. How are you get along these days? I think you may be much better now, but I’d better
have a good rest and take good care of yourselves since you are sixty-year-old man. I still
remember those days which you helped me to my English. With your help, I make good progress.
But to my regret, my English remains very poor through I have made good use of my time. Can
you give me some advice on it?
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误,对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边的横线上划一个(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误);则按下列情况改正:
此行多一词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,
the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring
Festival.My grandma was the best cooker in the world
but could make the most delicious dishes.One time, I just
couldn't wait for the Spring Festival dinner.As I was
about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in
the kitchen looking at me.Shake her head, she said, ‘It
isn't a good time to do that, dear.' At once I apologize
and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.You
know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month."
短文改错(满分10分)
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右
边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as_________
far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful________
if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school________
looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in_________
a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study________
better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, ________
photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons_________
and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but _________
unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a_________
little money, it can make our school a nicer place. ________
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
I often dream of a teacher. I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up. I am always
young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You have to learn in
order to teach. Without enough knowledges, you can never learn well. What is more, you have to
be friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Only by this way can you be a good teacher
and win respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my
dream come true.