假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, Mrs White went to the car park to get her car. When she got the car park, she found that someone stolen her car. So he rushed to the police station and told the police about it. However, next morning, the car was in its usual parking place in the car park. Inside the car is a note , “We are sorry that we stole your car. We really needed for an emergency trip to the hospital. Please accept these two tickets for Satur
day’s show at the Great Theater.” Mrs White’s husband said, “Criminals are a lot more politely nowadays. They are educating people.” So they went to the show. When they returned hom
e, there was something left in the house except a note saying that, “Hope you enjoyed the show!
短文改错。
其中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。。每处;错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在后面面的答线上写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,再在后面的答题线上写出该词,并也用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错误的词下画一条横线,并在后面的答题线写出修改后的词。
I learned early in life that I had to be more
patient and little aggressive. From the time
I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed
each of my toy. I was happy when the
toys worked, but when things did wrong,
I got angry and broke it.
For a while parents bought me new toys.
But before long they began to see which was happening.
When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,
my father said, “That’s it. No more toys to you.”
My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out
that with more patience I must make
my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.
下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily ![]() I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. am in Friday evening. on |
It is good to see that today a great amount of people have realized the importance of exercising.
But the problem is whether there are not enough sports facilities to meet the growing demand.
I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends.
Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one.
It seems that all courts in the city were always full of people.
Weather permitted, we can play outdoors.
But on rainy days or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts.
There are not much in my city, and the charge is expensive.
It is my strongly recommendation the government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will encourage more people to participate sports.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一个横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
Last week, my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows,it’s famous mountain with varieties of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain,the three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,we watched monkeys,visiting temples and told stories. On the way up, I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautifully. Time passes quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided to walk around a little after accepting that I’d have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked the door was delighted when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.
下面文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
例如:
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend /\ weekend with you. Luckily I was the am ![]() on evening. |
Dear Sebastian,
Unlike most of the flight I’ve taken on this trip, the journey from Melbourne to Sydney was thankful short. One hour! It’s much more hotter here in Sydney than in Melbourne, it is strange because I travel from south to north instead of north to south. Things really are upside down below the equator(赤道).
The Sydney Festival is fascinated, and I’m having a marvelous time go to all the art and film shows. It’s going on all mouth, and there’s so much to choose. Best of all, it’s not just in one location, but all over the city, because it’s a great way for me to explore Sydney.
Hope you’re having as many fun in Asia!
Zoe