第五部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：l、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2、只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
People like swimming in the summer because water makes them to feel cool. However, these years many people died while they were enjoyed themselves in water, and some of them were stud
ents. So some people are still not carefully in swimming. They often think they swim such well that nothing will happen on them in water. On hot summer days, if you will go swimming, remember that many good swimmer have died in water. They died because they were not careful, so don’t get into water when you are lonely. If you remember this, swimming will be safer.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When we got up in the morning every day, we start our daily routine: washing our faces,
brushing our teeth and maybe take a bath. When you do so, do you ever think that there is
enough water or not? One thirds of the 4.4 billion people in the developing world has no way to
clean drinking water. Water-relating diseases kill 10,000 to 20,000 children every day in the
developing world. What comes our minds when we read these numbers? Do you think we are
lucky or not? In a fact, the outlook for the future, even for us, are not very bright. So let us value
our water as much as possibly not only for ourselves, but also for our children.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处中加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents have decided to take me to pay visit to Britain. I am excited, hope to make good
use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my
English. Secondly, there are many attractions that interested me a lot, among which is Big Ben.
Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I have been dreaming of
watching a live football match there but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in
London. I will probable meet with her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该
行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用
斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Mary was an university student. She didn’t have much ____
money and her parents were not rich, and she had an uncle ____
who had been fortunately enough to collect great wealth. ____
He always give her valuable Christmas and birthday presents. ____
When her uncle’s birthday came round, Mary wanted buy him ____
something really special, but because she was rich, she did not ____
know how to get him. She went into the best shop in her ____
town and explained what her problem was to one of the helpful ____
shop assistant. Finally she asked, “What do you have for ____
someone who has already got everything he wants or need .
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处中加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago．One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store．A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks．Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale．They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital．Docto
rs examined them but gave them some medicine．They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine．This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem．I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety．
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
v增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
v删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
v修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
v注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in English. My pronunciation was terribly : I could only speak a few words. But one and a half yeas later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot of from your encouraging words. I will always remember what you said, “ If you try to , you can be No.1 !” I hope you’ve had pleasant journey home and will come to China again sometimes in the future. I will write again and send you the photos we take together.