第II卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分 写作（共35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good morning , everyone,
It’s great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born of a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teacher . Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy –going , get along well with my classmates.
It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your University has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors; I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.
I hope all my dream will come true in the near future.
Thank you.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
What will the city of the future like? No one know for sure, and make predictions is a risky business. In the future, care about the environment will become very important as some of the earth’s natural resources have been run out. We will use lots of recycling materials, such as plastics, aluminum, steel, glass, wood and paper, and we will waste less natural resources. We will also have to rely more on alternative energies, like solar and wind power. All this seems certain, and there are plenty of things about city life in the future are not certain.
Dear Brad ,
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school . I feel uneasily recently . At home I feel like prisoner . I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet . The only thing I have to do it is studying . Every time I got a low mark , my parents will scold me sharply . There's a generation gap among my parents and me , but it's always difficult to communicate . Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful , isn't it ? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university ? I am very unhappy and lost . I need your help .
Best wishes ,
Li Ping
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
About 70 million American are trying to lose weight. That’s almost one out of three in United States. Some ate less of certain foods, especial fat and sugar.
Others exercise, take medicine or even have operations. Losing a weight is not easy, and it can also cost lots of money. And why do many people in the US want lose weight? Many people worry for not looking young and pretty. Other people worry about health. Many doctors say putting on too much weight are not healthy. Almost 30 million people weigh at least 20 percent much than their usual weight.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧ ), 并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
As far as I know, time is not always enough all of us. So first of all, you need to arrange your time good. You’d better to make a long-term study plan. That is to say, an one-month plan with more efforts to take up his weak subjects. And a short-term plan is equal necessary, if not more important. You have to make sure what you need to do each day, each class or even each minute. At the same time, it’s quite essential to keeping healthy. So take exercise for at least one hour and sleep for no less than seven hour a day. And don’t forget to eat well. More fruit was always right for you.
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
In my hometown there was a river. Many students go and swim there,
so my parents don’t allow me to do that. They consider swimming
dangerous because of I am very thin and weak. They are afraid
they may drown. One afternoon, my friend and I went out to play.
They played in the river happy while I just stood in the bank.
I really wanted to join them. At last, one friend offered to teach
me where to swim. After half hour, to my surprise, I could swim.
I was exciting.