五、写作部分（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改一下作文。文中有十处语言错误，每处最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
It is reported, some needy students receive financial support from some kind people but never express our thanks. Personally, I think they are wrong. Though the helpers didn’t expect any reward in return, it is necessary and good manner to say “thank you”. Besides, it is a basic social skill express ourselves in modern society. Maybe some of them do feel thankfully. It is only because they are afraid of looked down upon which they remain silent. But I just want to say that being poor for a moment doesn’t means you will be poor forever.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I take the school bus to school every day when I was young. Alvin, our bus driver, picked out twenty kids in our area and dropped me off after school. Because my family was poor, so my parents seldom bought snacks for me. About once the month, he would make a stop at a local stores and buy each of us an ice cream. The kindness that he showed was amazed. Remembering the kindness he showed, I called him up ten years late and thanked him. I told him that he probable didn’t remember me, but I still remembered him. I could sense the excitement in his voice when he thanked me calling.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词.
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分.
Dear President,
I’m going to study in my university this year. But I’m worried about the university life. So I’m writing to ask you for some helps. Firstly, it’s possible that I might be confusing by the sudden change of the environment and didn’t know how to handle it properly. Secondly, I’m afraid I can take good care of myself but might feel lonely. Being a little bit of careless, I might sometimes lose things. Finally, I might be unable to get used for the new climate and food. Could you tell me what to deal with the problems so that I can make my university life much easier and fruitful?
Yours,
Li Hua
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每句不超过两个错误；
2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3．只允评修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Many of us feel somehow nervously whenever we are taking an important exam. Nervousness not only does harm to students' health but disturb their studies. So it’s necessary for our students to learn to relax. I think it's very important to have a right attitude for exams. Exams are only a means of checking how we have leaned. Therefore, there is no need to worry too much the results of the exams. Before an exam, make a scientific study plan and keeping a peaceful mind must help to reduce the pressure from the exam. We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music. Beside, enough sleep and a balanced diet will work as well.
Follow my advice and so you will enjoy your school life.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a good friend who name is Liu Mei．She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class．Clever as she is，but she works very hard．We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening，she told me that something happened when her parents was out．She was doing her homework one Sunday morning while she smelt something burning．She stopped look out of the window and found a cloud of smoke come out of her neighbor’s house．She called 119 immediate．Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire．Her neighbor was very thankful for her help．
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In my family, there are three people. My father is hardworking but goes to work every day. He isn’t good at talk but he gets on well with other people. My mother is very much kind and is friendly to everybody. So when I have the problem I will turn to him for help.My friends say I am clever. When the teacher asks us very difficulty questions, I’ll think quickly and stand to answer. At home my father often thinks I’m silly. He said once I decide to do something, it takes him much times to stop me. This is how I need to improve in the future.