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Half a year before I went abroad for further study. I received a lot of present. All were wrapped in color paper. Among them were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buy me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different countries in them. My brother gave me a note, which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” While I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box in it. Open the box, I got a pocket computer. I was very glad. I understood these two presents would help me using body language to communicate people and improve my English.
Today I showed some foreign friends in our city. We started 1.
off by a car from the Friendship Hotel at 8 o’clock am. We first went 2.
to the Zhongshan Park. We were both struck by its beautiful flowers 3.
there. Then, we visited the city museum. We saw plenty of valuable 4.
things, from them we learned more about the city. After that we 5.
devote to the Jinshan Temple. There is a beautiful place of interest in6.
our city, but from there we enjoyed the wonderful scenery of the 7.
sea.We had a delicious lunch at the Seafood Restaurant and come 8.
back at 1:20 pm. All the foreign friends were pleased my arrangement. 9.
I was happy that we do have a wonderful time today.10.
Once upon a time there was a farmer worked hard in the fields 1.
every day. One day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a 2.
bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lie by the trump. He picked it 3.
up and found that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to him,“Since it 4.
is so easy get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all day 5.
long?” He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreamed for 6.
more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolish and returned 7.
to his fields, he found that all his crops are dead. This story tells that 8.
we should wait for unexpected gains by trusting to chance and luck. 9.
Or, we should not hope to get reward without hard work. 10.
Which we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important 1.
for us to form into healthy eating habits. However, bad habits are still very 2.
common among we students. Some of us often go to school without 3.
breakfast .Some like to have snacks; some others are particular with food; 4.
and still some eat or drink too many. All these bad habits will be bad for our health
5.
To keep fit, we should have various health diets, which generally 6.
include proper amount of fish, meat, vegetable, fruit as well as main food. 7.
Beside, we had better have meal regularly.8.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up 9.
a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy study better. 10.
Choose what to eat is no longer as easy as it once was. Our eating habits 1.
have changed , as have our way of life. And the fuel we need for our2.
body is also different. Tradition diets often have too much fat and too3.
much calories for the 21st-century person. If we want to keep up with the4.
high pace of modern life, we had better to learn to make the right choices5.
about what and how we eat. Because we have so much to choose, many 6.
companies offer advice about what we should eat. It’s good if we spend our 7.
time and money in buying food and keep a balanced diet. Instead of eating 8.
expensive diet or going on unhealthy diets, we can simply try to eat little 9.
sugar and take more exercise. I hope that everyone keeps a good health. 10.
短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
Dear Mary,
I am sorry that you had a disagreement with your father. Personal, 76. ________
I think this is important to follow your interests and your abilities, 77. ________
but it sounds as though you have plenty of both of these already. 78. ________
Speak to your father and tell him what you are doing well in the79. ________
subject of your choice. Furthermore, remind him that many men80. ________
have chosen to work in fields that are not used to accept women. 81. ________
Ask your father to speak to your teachers and find out how well 82. ________
you are at your chosen subject. Trust you. Trust your own83. ________
thinking and your choice. Hopefully, your father will respect84. ________
your choice and let you to do what you want to. 85. ________
Best wishes.
Amy