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One day I had happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in
English . I tried to chat with any of them . To my surprise , I found the oral English of some
junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice but they told me practise
more on QQ. So every day after that I would spend o
ne hour practise my oral English on QQ.
Day by day I le
arned many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I
could even communicate with some college students free.
Lily is one of the puipls who is studying in Dongshan 1.
Primary School. One day，in her way to school，Lily found 2.
a wallet lay on the road. She picked it up and found a lot of 3.
money and a calling card in them. She thought the loser must 4.
be worried. Without the wallet，she went to a public telephone 5.
and called on the owner. Then she waited at the bus-stop. The owner 6.
came by taxi in a moment. Lily gave the wallet to her. The owner 7.
was very thankful that she took out a 100-yuan note to rewardLily. 8.
And she refused it and went to school. Seeing this , the ownerraised 9.
her thumb and praised Lily helping her in time again and again . 10.
I sing when I feel good. When I sing my most favorite songs, 1.
I feel even better. Sometimes when I am listening to music 2.
and to the song words, I feel that it is specially written for me. 3.
A good song always makes me feeling something. They 4.
help me get through with the day. I also like reading. I used 5.
to avoiding poetry until an e-pal told me that I should recite 6.
poems and not to look up the meaning of the words. 7.
At the beginning I felt quite strange. Now I always lock the 8.
door. Read aloud gives you a good feeling when you are sad. 9.
When a poem is finished , I close the book and my sad is gone. 10.
Dear Nick,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August 8. And 1.
I think you made a wise choice to travel here. Sichuan provinceis2.
rich in attractions and enjoys many famous places of interests.3.
Jiu Zhaigou is well known for it’s beautiful lakes, of which 4.
the water is clear but looks colorful. It can excite visitors’ 5.
imagination .Another attraction is Dujiangyan which was built 6.
2000 years ago and was still playing an important in irragation 7.
today. Besides, the nice weather a can make your trip much 8.
enjoyable. I am sure that you have a good time. 9.
I am looking forward to your come.10.
Over the past twenty years, American country music become 1.
more and more popular. Some writers are no longer writing about 2.
modern values of the USA. In 1950s, American music was about other3.
things . Money was also thought to be important. Ten years late, 4.
some writers turned other subjects. During these years, many young 5.
students were angry with society. So songs were often full of angry. 6.
Political leaders were not well thought and those songs often made 7.
fun of them. Country music today remains much the same as ago. 8.
One subject which country music often returns is “the good old days”.9.
And in “the good old days”, people love life on the open air. 10.
Thank you for your e-mail ! You ask about my friends and what 1.
we like to do. I guess I do that most people do. I like reading books, 2.
watch films and listening to music. My favorite sport is volleyball. 3.
Most my friends play volleyball with me. My best friend is two older4.
years than me. She goes to a different school and we always get 5.
together after school to talk and have fun. Tell me yourself, your friends6.
and what you like to do. I would also like to know something about7.
China . We have read about China in school and I am very interesting 8.
in learning more about it. Please e-mail to me soon. Thanks. 9.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon now. 10.