假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
短文改错
Once,lately at night,an Englishman came out of his room into the passage of the hotel and ask the servant to bring her a glass of water.The servant did as he asked.The Englishman reentered his room,and a few minutes later he came into the passage again and once more asked the servant a glass of water.Every few minutes the Englishman would come out of his room and repeat his request.After a half hour the astonished servant decided to ask the man what he was doing with the water.“Nothing,” he answered calmly,“It’s simply that the room is on fire.”
One afternoon, when I was on my way home, the sky changed suddenly . Dark clouds were gathered . I began to feel worried because I didn’t have both a raincoat or umbrella about me .It soon started to rain.Just as I was hurrying home , I heard of someone calling me from behind . I turned to have a look and find that he was Liu Wei , a good neighbour of me . He offered to share his umbrella with me . We walked all the ways home . Without Liu Wei’s help , I would have got wet to the skin . How much thankful I was for his help !
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下面画一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.
短文改错(共10 小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
注意:1. 没处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多处(从第11处起)不计分。
In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong is going on her way to school happily when suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking. The trees were torn up and many buildings was leaning down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by the fallen buildings. She was knocked down by a tree before she knew. Two doctors carried him to safety and she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she got over. Seen so many helpers from the mainland of China and other countries, she believed all the destroying houses would be build.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Upon our arrival, we gave a warm welcome to the American students, among them a boy named Tim was to stay with my family for the weekend. I recognized Tim compared him with photo he had sent to me. Tim greeted me and expressed that how excited he felt. When school was over, we took the subway home. My parents prepared a rich family dinner that night and we had enjoyed ourselves so much, eating and chatting. The next day, I act as a guide, showing Tim along the most famous scenic spots in Beijing. Wherever he went, he had some photos take to help him memorize this unforgettable trip to China. The time to say goodbye came when we realized it, and I gave Tim a kite as a souvenir.