此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个(√)；如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改!
One day I happened to find a chatting room on the
internet, where people were chatting on English. I tried
to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the
fact that the oral English of some junior students were better
than mine. I asked them for an advice and they told me
to practise more on QQ. What I wish I could speak English
as good as these fellows! Therefore every day after that I
would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ.
Day by day I learned many good and useful words and
expression. With time going by , I found that I could
even communicate with some college students free.
A US-led War against Iraq broke out in March 20, 2003 without the agreement of the UN. They came less than two hours after Bush's deadline for Saddam leave his country has passed. There are about 250,000 US armies around Iraq. There are also armies from another countries, includes Britain and Australia, fighting with the American soldiers. Their force is much more bigger than that of Iraq. But they met strong resistance than they expected. “These things are never easy. There will have some difficult times ahead so the War is going on as its plan,” said British Prime Minister Blair.
There are strange similarities in the life of John F. Kennedy and the life Abraham Lincoln. For example, Kennedy became a president in 1960, while Lincoln elected in 1860.This was exactly one hundred years apart. Then both men were shot after, on a Friday and in the presence of their wife. There is another very strangely similarity. Kennedy's secretary, named Lincoln, told him to go to Dallas. Lincoln's secretary, named Kennedy, told him not to go to the Ford Theatre. But all of them went and both were shot to die.
If there are much more people in the world, there must have more food to feed the people. But food is already a problem in today world. One-third of the world's population is starving, because there is not enough food. Ten thousand people died of hunger every day in some parts of the world. But in others parts of the world, people become ill or die, because they eat too much food, and they are very fat. Some countries have no food, but the others have too much, and they throw them away. How can tomorrow's world feed its people? The world needs produce more food than it does now.
We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot of. We understood them further. On the way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we had a very good day. We real hoped that we could get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.
On Children's Day last year, our city held an interested activity, in which children and their parents play the rich and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge(粥). Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They hoped that their children could be taught the lesson from the dinner. Now many people on earth don't have enough food and clothes. Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. The activity was held make the families understand the differences from the poor and the rich and also make the parents know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.