英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am
eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was
born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer
Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good
at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some
writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy
playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you
let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to
hearing from you soon.
During the summer of 2001, I started reading books
in English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new 1．_______
words from these books, but I had terribly problems 2．_______
memorizing them. I had to look up to the same word 3．_______
many times, for which was quite troublesome. I realized 4．_______
I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary. It was 5．_______
a great achievement for myself. I started writing down 6．_______
words from books that I read. I would come back from 7．_______
school, and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down 8．_______
new words and added it to my collection. By the end 9．_______
of last year，my collection has grown to 3,000 words. 10．_______
On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself 1. _______
to do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip 2. _______
to London, and visit the British Museum and some 3. _______
parks. But I have spent lots my money, so I cannot 4. _______
even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. 5. _______
Yes, a concert can be very excited. You can watch your 6. _______
stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a 7. _______
concert cost so much. I may just listen to music, I have 8. _______
some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen 9. _______
to my own records, there are no need to spend money. 10. _______
All right. That' s what I' m going to do.
Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. _______
describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. _______
it seems always difficult for me to do things well as 3. _______
them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4. _______
a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5. _______
Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they 6. _______
don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 7. _______
very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8. _______
once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 9. _______
seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 10. _______
Yours,
Xiao Wei
Although the first computer was only introduced
to China in the mid-1950s, since then ,a number of computers 1._____
used in different fields has been grown rapidly. 2.______
Computers are now affected millions of people in countless ways 3.______
every day. They are used to predict the weather, examine the 4.______
ocean,and to develop defence systems. They depend more and more 5._____
heavy on computers. There is no reason to think that their use 6._____
will decrease.By the contrary ,they will develop more rapidly 7. ______
as you think.If you are among those who still don't know much 8.______
about computers, you will lost in the future.
9.______
You should learn what you can while you still have the chance
10.______
The others day, on his way back from school, Li Ming 1._____
found a strange-looked toy car lying on the grass. 2._____
Curiously, he picked it out and played with it. To his 3.______
great surprising, suddenly ,the toy became larger and larger . 4.______
Finally it changed into a real car .A moment Li Ming 5.______
got into the car ,from a speaker above coming a stranger’s 6._____
voice: “Please input your address on the screen in front of 7._____
you, and fastened your seat belt. You will go wherever 8._____
you like ”. As a boy full of adventures, Li Ming decided to 9._____
take a risk and try on this magic car …. 10.____