假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
I used to be a loser and everything which I did always had wrong. During that time, I was extreme disappointed with myself. I couldn’t do everything well however how easy it was. In the meantime, an old friend of me encouraged me to stand up again and told me that I was still young enough to try more times. I took his advices and made a great effort to achieve something. Then I found I could do things much more better. Now I not longer think I am a loser. I determined to do everything well.
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第 Ⅱ 卷(共35分)
第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断，如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾()；如果有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When people think about precious things, they usually
think about money or jewelry. I am not very rich, and I have 76. ___________
something very preciously in my room. It’s not a CD player or 77. ___________
a cellphone. It's the view from my window. I’m lucky live 78. ___________
near a park. My window faces with the tops of the trees in 79. ___________
the park. Below the tree I can see children on the playground, 80. ___________
young couples walked quietly, mothers with children, and 81. ___________
old people sitting on the beach. The whole world is before 82. ___________
their eyes. My classmates like to go online or listen to music, 83. ___________
but when I have a free time, I just sit on the chair and 84. ___________
enjoyed the most precious thing in my room: the view. 85. ___________
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第二节：短文改错（共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误在该行右边横线上画一个勾(∨)；如有错误(每一行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Xiao Wang,
Learned that you are going to visit me during the 76.______
holiday, I’m so happy that I have shared the good news 77.______
with your parents. They look forward to seeing you, too. 78.______
My hometown located in a mountainous region. The 79.______
mountains here are all covered up with trees of all kinds 80.______
or are worth touring. The first thing we may do after 81.______
you arrive are going to the woods, which are a good place 82.______
for bird. After that, we can go fishing in a river nearby. 83.______
Phone me before you set off and let me know exact 84.______
when you will get there. I will meet you at station. 85.______
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Zhang Ying
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第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个对号；如多词，则用（ \ ）划掉；如缺词，则在此处加一个（^），并把正确的写在横线上；如错一词，则在此词下面划线，，在右边横线上写出改正后的词。
A lady once wrote a long story and sent to a famous editor.76____________
In a few weeks the story was returned to her. The lady got 77.____________
angrily. She wrote to the editor. “Dear sir , yesterday you 78.____________
sent back the story of mine. How do you know why the 79.____________
story is not good? You did not read it .After I sent it 80.____________
to you, I pasted (粘) together pages 18, 19 or 20. This was 81.____________
a test to see whether you would real read the story. 82.____________
When it came back yesterday, the pages still pasted together. 83.____________
Is this the way where you read all the stories that are sent 84.____________
to you?” The editor wrote back “Dear madam, at breakfast 85.___________
when I open an egg, I don’t have to eat all the eggs in order to
discover that it is bad.”
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短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分, 满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误, 在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）, 则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I was only about six that he held his hand81. _________________
out to me. I took it in me and we walked. Then82. _________________
I ask him, “Grandpa, how come you have83. _________________
so much lines on your hand?” he laughed and 84. _________________
said, “Well, that’s a big question!” He was 85. _________________
silent for a moment. So he answered slowly:86. _________________
“Each these lines stands for a trouble in my 87. _________________
life.” I looked at his other hands. “But Grandpa, 88. _________________
what do you have more lines on that one?”89. _________________
“Because there are more the honors and joys90. _________________
in my life.”
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第五部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday I am about to leave the Green Lake Park when I met a foreign visitor whose seemed to be lost. I tried to help him but I found we had difficulty in understand each other because of my poor English. Just at that moment, tall young lady came to our help. He spoke very good English. With her help, the foreign visitor finally found the way but I learned some English as well. Before he left, the foreigner thanked to us for our kindness. I was very exciting that day. This experience have made me realize that English is real useful and worth learning. I will work hard at it from now on.