假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同旧式写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号
，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Robert,
Thank for your letter of May 12th. How glad I was when I get it. I’d
be very happy to be your pen friends. Now allow me introduce myself to
you. I’m a boy student aging seventeen, study in Senior Three of Hongqi
High School. I’m a monitor of my class. I am about to take National
Matriculat
ion Entrance Examination after twenty days, that is,
between June 7 and 8．You know. I want very much to be a doctor working
for poor peasants that I try to make fully use of every hour
and study far into the night every day.
Best wishes！
Yours truly
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误, 在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）, 如果有错误（每行只有一个错误）, 则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Mr. Li,
I am one of your mobile newspaper user. I know your_________
mobile newspaper is a first English mobile newspaper_________
that is designed teenage readers in China. It is very________
popular among teenagers. You had provided a good service for _________
teenagers. Every day, we are able to receive the late English_________
news and stories from the mobile newspaper, which make. ________
it convenient for teenagers to learn English. However, I________
wonder that you can add some new columns (栏目) we_________
teenagers are interested in them. We will appreciate being_________
able to reading more in such columns. _________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。（答题格式不规范不给分）
How I dislike acting dishonest in exams! This morning, Henry tried to____
copy his answers. He whispered to me so that the teacher couldn't hear..
I didn’t know how to deal with it. If I don’t show him the answers, he ____
might mad. Henry is my friend. I really don’t want to destroy our___
friendship. But showing him the answers would be something what goes__
against my beliefs. During the exam, I tried several ways to guard against my____
answers so that Henry wouldn’t be able to see it. I moved myself closer___
to my desk, and covered my paper by my arm. After the exam,____
I explained Henry how I was feeling and promised to help him study _
before the next exam. Henry understood that but I was finally able to breathe___
again.
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。（答题格式不规范不给分）
How I dislike acting dishonest in exams! This morning, Henry tried to____
copy his answers. He whispered to me so that the teacher couldn't hear..
I didn’t know how to deal with it. If I don’t show him the answers, he ____
might mad. Henry is my friend. I really don’t want to destroy our___
friendship. But showing him the answers would be something what goes__
against my beliefs. During the exam, I tried several ways to guard against my____
answers so that Henry wouldn’t be able to see it. I moved myself closer___
to my desk, and covered my paper by my arm. After the exam,____
I explained Henry how I was feeling and promised to help him study _
before the next exam. Henry understood that but I was finally able to breathe___
again.
下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起）不记分。
Tom,
I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had cone. I’m looking forward to receiving your letter.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误. 对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√); 如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉.
此行缺一个词: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 在该行右边横线上写该加的词.
此行错一个词: 在错的词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词.
注意: 原行没有错的不要改.
Mary was an university student. She didn’t have much_________
money and her parents were not rich, and she had an uncle.________
who had been fortunate enough to collect great wealthy.._________
He always gave her valuable Christmas and birthday present._________
When her uncle’s birthday came round, Mary want to buy him ._________
something real special, but because he was rich, she did not._________
know how to get him. She went into the best shop in her_________
town and explained what her problem was to one of helpful._________
shop assistants. Finally she asked, “What do you have for._________
someone who has already got everything she wants or needs to ?” _________
The assistant sighed deeply and answered, “envy, only envy.”