假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的-优题课

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachache with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention for food safety.

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

..TheteacherwasverysurprisingthatJimdidn'tpasstheexam.
..Hismotherlooksmoreyoungerthanmine
. Itoldhimwaitformeanother10minutes.
..Heistalkingonthephonehappy
..Shehasmorethantwohunaredsbooks
..On his way to home, he found a man lying on the road.
.Dick is afraid of meet the boss.
..When he heard the news , he got angrily .
..Everyone in our class like take-away food .
..Could you give me anything to eat ?

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分, 满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was
very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to
a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview.
Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden,
looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the
company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had
no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the
workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he
was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give
the job to whoever he believed was helpful.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Jack London had a very hardly life. He born in San Francisco on January 12, 1876. In 1893 he become a sailor. For the next four years he fought and working his way around the world. He begged his food from door to door. When that he was twenty-one he decided to try and get an education, but before a few months he left school and went off to take part in the Klondyke Gold Rush on 1897. She hiked in north western Canada, and came back empty-handed. Two years late he sold his first story. From that time on he made his livings by writing.