假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第十一处起)不计分。
Dear editor,
 I’m a student come from a remote and poor village. Let me share you a touching story about my teacher, Ren Ying, which is in a wheelchair. She caught a serious disease and lose her ability to move in 1986, but she failed the college entrance examinations because of the handicap. After attempt suicide twice, she began self-study. Later, she run a school for children in the village. He has been a teacher and a headmaster for 12 years. Now our school has 6 grade and 200 students.
Yours, 
 LiHua
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。全文共十处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误渉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。
 此句多一个词:把多余的词用(﹨)划掉。
 此句缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在正下方写出该加的词。
 此句错一个词; 在错的词下划一横线,在该词的正下方写出改正后的词。
 注意:1.每处错误及其修改只限一词;
 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
 This morning I went to the English corner in the park near my home. It was three years since it was found. Many middle school students as good as college students and foreigners take part the activity. People there practice speak English by talking about something interesting. People also exchange the experience in English learning. I think it is good chance for me to use that I have learned in my English class. I was felt very cool after I got back home. I’ll try my best for learn English better,for it is so wide used in the world.
下面短文中有8处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面加上该加的词。
 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
 2. 只允许修改8处,多者(从第9处起)不计分。
| 例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily the ![]() I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. am in Friday evening.  | 
  
My uncle will n ever forget what was happened to him yesterday. He was invited to a inn and drank a lot of beer with his old friends. Finally, he got drunk. He insisted driving home after the meal, though his friends try to persuade him not to. A few minutes later, he was winding his ways on the street. And his car ran into a tall tree. Lucky, he was still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to the hospital. Naturally, they had to stay in hospital for some days. Worse still, his driving license was taken away. How he regrets which he has done!
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She hold the view that Senior
 Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that 
 once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks 
 it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest 
 after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at 
 abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
 增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
 As a student, I hate the exam system we are now used. This system may be a good way to 
 test a s
tudent’s memory, and it can tell you nothing about a student’s ability. It does not 
 good to students or teachers. As soon as a child begins the school, he enters a world of 
 exams that will decide his future. In fact a good exam system should train a student to 
 think himself, but it now does something like that. So students are encouraged to 
 remember what is taught. The students who 
comes out first in the exam often may not be 
 the best in their studies. It must be some better way to test a student’s true ability except 
 k
nowledge. And that is where we should do right now.
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
 修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
 注意:
 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限1词;
 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
 The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what to stop wasting water. One of the steps that we should take are to find ways of reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can reused. But even if every large city purified and reused it’s water, we still would have enough water.