假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^),在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下划—横线,在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
第四部分:
第一节:
Last Saturday the students of our class made a bike trip of a
small town .We set off earlier in the morning.
After getting to the town, we had visited some places of interest. At noon,
we had picnic near the town. Everybody was attracted by the beautifully scenery
and we took a lot of picture there. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing,
some rowed boats on the water, but others flew kites.
We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trip for us,
during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help.
We have learned to help, understand and sharing with others.
In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误,请找出,并按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行 右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Peter,
Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday __________
party on Sunday. I'd like very much go but __________
I had an examination on Monday morning. It is __________
a very important exam but I can't afford to __________
fail it. I'll spend all the whole weekend reading __________
and prepare for it. So I'm really sorry that __________
you won't be able to go this time. Hope you __________
can understand. I Ml take this chance to wish __________
you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy __________
birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! __________
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误,请找出,并按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Peter was walking back home from school, thought about the __________
class today. It was about giving the first aid. Suddenly he saw __________
a young girl lay on the ground. She seemed to be asleep but Peter __________
saw that her face was very pale. He walked up to the girl and call __________
softly, "Miss, Miss. " She moved slightly and gave no clear response. _______
He put her hand under her nose. Yes, she was even breathing. Then he _________
suddenly saw that it was a wound on her left leg and blood was flowing _______
out. She might have hit by a car. He dialed 120 and called an ambulance _______
while waited for it, then he put the girl in the recovery position by________
roll her onto one side and placing her left upper arm under her chin. _________
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误,请找出,并按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
I'm a senior three student. I often do bad in my__________
exams, so I have been trying to catch up the others.__________
But I'm such concerned about my marks that sometimes__________
I cannot eat or sleep well at a night. I'm afraid that__________
I may get low marks in the tests again even if I work__________
hard than before. I have no courage to face low marks. __________
I cannot fix my mind to my study, whenever I think of__________
this. It is obvious that the worry had a bad effect on__________
my school works. I'm feeling very sad. Would you__________
please telling me how I should deal with my worry?__________
Dear Alice,
I have just got some good news to tell to you.________
I win a national prize for painting last week.________
My father was so pleasing that he suggested________
I go to England for a holiday.I’d like to staying________
there for half a month,visiting place of interest________
or practicing my English as well.We’ve been________
writing to each for nearly a year now.I have________
often dreamed of talk face to face with you.________
I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that________
time.Perhaps we could go out do some ________
sightseeing together.
Best,
Lily
May 10,2011
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down ___________
and hurt my foot.I was in greatly pain at that moment, ___________
but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the ___________
class was over.Though I had difficulty walk back to ___________
my classroom,I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused__________
the offer of help of my classmates.As result,the hurt ___________
in my foot became bad.Now I know I’m wrong.We ___________
can tell others our need for help and accept his help. ___________
Some day we can not help others in return.In this way ________
we can get along to each other happily and peacefully. ________