假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^),在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下划—横线,在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
第四部分:
第一节:
Last Saturday the students of our class made a bike trip of a
small town .We set off earlier in the morning.
After getting to the town, we had visited some places of interest. At noon,
we had picnic near the town. Everybody was attracted by the beautifully scenery
and we took a lot of picture there. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing,
some rowed boats on the water, but others flew kites.
We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trip for us,
during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help.
We have learned to help, understand and sharing with others.
In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每个错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(__),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
When I was ten years old, I went to Yangzhou with two American.I became their guide.First, we went to the Shouxi River.They wanted to look around the river by the boat.After buy the tickets, we got into a boat.We went around seeing the beautiful sight.After that, we went shopping.The sellers couldn’t spoke English.Though it was very harder, I tried my best listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences.They bought some little things with their help.Next, we went to a small zoo but took some pictures.When we felt hunger, we went out and had lunch.After lunch, we visited some old house and learned more about Chinese history.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After school I went to home for supper. When I got home, I found my mother laying in bed.She was ill. Unluckily, my father was away from home in business. “What shall I do?” I thought to me. Since Mother was ill, I must take well care of her. So I decided to try cooking by myself. I did the cooking with great difficulty but it got burnt at last. I had thought Mother would never like. To my joy, Mother praised me for the meat I have cooked. She said, “It tastes delicious. I’m very pleasing with it.” I knew Mother was encouraging us to do more by myself.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It doesn’t matter to fail as long as you don’t give up. To my opinion, it is hard to be successful. Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up. And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try. That’s okay. Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who’ve had the most failure. J.K. Rowling, who wrote Harry Potter, had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published. Michael Jordan was cut his high school basketball team. He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career. But he once said, “I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that’s because I succeed.”
下面短文中有10处错误。请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007.I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road.He fell with a cry.The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west.I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864.After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词;
3. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.