假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其—F面写山该加的词。删除
：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其卜面写山修改斤的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Walter's goa1 in life was become a successfully doctor．He knew he had to finish high school first, so he put his heart into his study—in particular, biology, chemistry, and maths．Because he worked hard at these subjects, Walter became g
ood at it．However, Walter forgot that he needed to master some other subjects besides those he had been chosen．As a result, Walter fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year．But he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate as planning．Walter learned good lesson.
第四部分：写作（共三节）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Helen is one of my best friends. She had taught76. _________
us English when I attended training class two 77. _________
years before. Helen always made good preparations 78. _________
for the lesson, and she tried her best to make 79. _________
her classes lively. I used to being poor in English, 80. _________
especially in written English. But now I'm able 81. _________
to write English letters and reports correct. 82. _________
I still remember how she helped me for my 83. _________
English patiently. Teachers' Day's come. I'm going to 84. _________
send to her a card and give her best wishes. 85. _________
六、短文改错
I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our 71 ______
topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety 72 ______
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To 73 ______
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our 74 ________
surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like, 75 ________
some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in 76 ________
rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 77 ________
their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through 78 ________
our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention 79 ________
to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect. 80 ________
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题 1.5 分, 满分 15 分）
In front of a shop, there was long line of 76．_______
Bicycles. The parking attendant was busy with77．_______
receiving and saw his customers off when a thief 78．_______
got a chance to steal a bicycle. The thief locked the 79．_______
bicycle, got on it and riding away. Seeing that, the attendant 80．_______
shouted to the people who were passing by for help. And 81．_______
unfortunately ,anybody reacted. Disappointed and 82．_______
helplessly, the attendant watched the thief disappear. 83．_______
Of course he had to pay the owner of the stealing 84．_______
bicycle 400 yuan as compensation. 85．_______
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Mrs. Smith was unable to fall sleeping at night and 61．________
was very tired during the day to do anything, even the 62．________
simple things that she used to enjoy doing. She had 63．________
headaches more often, it prevented her from reading 64．________
or watched TV. The more she thought about her conditions, 65．________
the more worse she felt. At last she went to see her doctor, 66．________
whom she had known for years. The doctor listened to his 67．________
heart and said, “There is nothing serious wrong with 68．________
you, and I accept the fact you don 't feel well. Now I’ll 69．________
give you some pills （药丸）that help. Come tomorrow 70．________
morning and tell me how you felt.”
二、非选择题
1．短文改错
I don’t know John Denver. However, I’ve heard him. 25．________
He preferred country music for pop music. I like his 26．_______
songs and sometimes I keep listen all day. He 27．_______
made lots of records and his music had broadcast on 28．________
the radio. He was not just a singer but a song writer. 29．________
When people were angry with society but didn’t think 30．________
well of political leaders, he begins to turn to this 31．________
subject with other singers. They made o fun of them 32．________
by singing songs full of angry. Though Denver died, 33．________
country music have become more and more popular. 34．________