英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误,每句最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1 每处错误及其修改均仅
限一词。
2 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
3 必须按答题要求做题,否则不给分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the
street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young
man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell
off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t
know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached.
They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote
something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
短文改错(共10小题,每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求在答题卡上改正所给短文中的错误,请根据上下文对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上划一个();如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出应加的单词。
此行错一个词:在错词下画一横线,在在该行右边横线上写出改正后的单词。
注意:原行没有错误的不要改。
John Brown is London taxi driver who love going to the
Theatre .Last week his mother gave him two tickets for a play.
The tickets were on Sunday evening. Then John read some
Reviews of the play, which all said it was a terribly one! He
Wouldn’t go to see a play that no one liked it, So two hours
Before the play started, he left the ticket on the back seat of
His taxi, Perhaps someone who wanted ∧ see the play would take
Them. However, while John went back home, the tickets were
Still there. In the fact ,there were four tickets on the seat.
Someone has placed another pair of tickets on top of them!
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误,对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无
错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(Ⅴ);如果有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词,在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横向,在该行的右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
As summer vacation are coming soon, my classmates are
trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But
I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from
home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed
to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When
they came here, I will show them around my university
and the city just as well. I have decided to buy them
some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My
parents have done a lot for me, and I think it is high time
that I did anything special to express my thanks.
Last Sunday morning when I got up, to me great surprise, 1.___________
I found that we had a big snowfall. I was very excited because 2.___________
it was a long time that I had ever seen such a heavy snowfall. 3.___________
So I decided to call my friends to go out to play snow together. 4.___________
We made up some snowmen and rolled some snowballs 5.___________
and we enjoyed the fun of playing fighting games. Just then 6.___________
we noticed that the buses and cars move very slowly 7.___________
because the heavy snow. So we went to clean the snow so as to 8.___________
help the traffic go safely. After the all morning’s hard work, 9.___________
we cleaned the snows on the road, and we went home happily. 10.___________
One day, did not feeling well, Mr. Smith went to the hospital 1.____________
to have him examined. When he was given the test report, 2.____________
he was greatly shocked. “Am I dying?” He immediately 3.____________
was felt very ill. Filled with sadness, he went back home,4.____________
taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will. “Maybe 5.____________
a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and 6.____________
went to the hospital to have more examination. To his 7.____________
great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t 8.____________
have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful. 9.____________
Mr. Smith went out for his favourite sport happily rather sadly. 10.___________
Yang Liwei was born from an ordinary family in Liaoning 1.____________
Province in 1965. He became the pilot in Chinese Air Force 2.____________
in 1987, spend 1,350 hours in the air. He has spent 5 years 3.____________
training to become a spaceman. He sent into space at 9 a.m on 4.____________
October 15th by China’s Shenzhou V spacecraft, that orbited 5.____________
the earth 14 times. He landed safe at 6:23 a.m the next day, 6.____________
making China the third country successfully sending a person 7.____________
into space before the former Soviet Union and the USA. 8.____________
Yang Liwei comes back to the earth after a 21-hour trip 9.____________
to space. In space Yang recorded to everything he saw and 10.___________
showed China’s national flag to the people watching on TV.