假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On a snowy winter night,a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because of the wet road.And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse,the bus ran out of gas and it is very cold in it.They could do nothing but to wait for help.A man who lived nearby saw what happened.He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of bus.He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children.They spent two days in their home and finally helps came.All of them were thankful with his help.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot.I was in great pain at that moment but I tried to act as if nothing happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn't tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmates. As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse.Now I know I am wrong.we can tell other our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him in return.In this way, we can get along with each other happily and peacefully.
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. Like everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy take pictures since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service wasgood. I was so tiring that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
3、请注意改错要求并将答案改在答题卷的相应位置,其他位置无效。
One morning I got up early, so I went out for walk. It was so early when I left home that the streets were quietly. Without the usual crowds, everything is very quiet. I walked towards the park, found that there were such many people there. Some were doing morning exercise, some were sitting on the benches, and some were feeding pigeons. One hour late, I left the park and walked home, feeling very exciting. An old English saying came into my mind, “Early to bed and early to rise make a man healthy, wealthy and wise.”
June 12, Sunday, Fine
Today is Sunday. I didn't get up early as usually. In themorning after I finished my home-work, I do some washing.Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited himto see a film. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinemaat 300 p.m. we found all the tickets had sold out.So we went to our school and played the football.After that, when we were about to go home, we saw ourEnglish teacher, Mr. Wang, came into the school gate. He told us we had made many progress in English this term. He also suggested that we should read more and wrote more.We promised that we would take his advices.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred Yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine what happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.