假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On a snowy winter night,a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because of the wet road.And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse,the bus ran out of gas and it is very cold in it.They could do nothing but to wait for help.A man who lived nearby saw what happened.He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of bus.He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children.They spent two days in their home and finally helps came.All of them were thankful with his help.
Dear George,
It’s been a week after we left your family and we are ____________
now back home.Thank you very much for showing them ____________
around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals.After__________
we said goodbye you,we went to Washington D.C., ________________
where we stayed for three days.My brother was so much fond____________
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying_________________
another couple of day.However,my father had to return to___________
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.It___________
was really a nice experience.If you’d like to make trip to___________
our city some day,I will be better than happy to be your guide. ___________________
Michael was walking along the street other __________
day.Then he felt someone calling his name. __________
He stopped and looked around.He was Jack_________
Smith were running after him.Michael and__________
Jack went to the same school and then to__________
same university.So they hadn’t met each other_________
ince then.They decide to have lunch together. __________
They went to the nearest restaurant and sat by the _________
table near the window.Then they talked about that __________
they had done since they graduated university __________
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处加一个漏符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Wang Ping,
I’m very glad to have received a letter you sent me two weeks before. I’ve been thinking about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finish your studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is bad needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know that a few big company in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For other reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as we are getting old. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return back. So what are you waiting for?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you may be often feel lonely. That’s why you are new here and people don’t know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advices below.
First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters. At the same time, never fail to listening to other people’s views. Second, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly. Last but not least, I will always ready to help you. We can take part in some activities together, when I can introduce you to others.
As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you.
Best regards.
Peter
I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years before. It was really huge lake with beautiful scenery all around. People were amazed by the endless view in front of our eye. Later on, unlike other girls, I was volunteered to go waterskiing alone. I took on the life jacket, got off the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possibly.
The lake seemed broad and endless. I was so exciting to appreciate the beauty of the mountains and waters that I speed my motorboat. Then, after some time, I found me in the middle of the endless lake. I really enjoyed the unforgettable experience!