英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误，每句最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
3 必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
Dear Tom,
It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like tell you something which took place in my school yesterday.
In the afternoon we hold a grown –up ceremony for our coming 18 years old birthday. First we made an oath that as grown-up we should have a sense of duty for our social from now on. Then we showed our thanks for to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave us cards expressed their good wishes to them. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing or dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will never forget the day in my life.
Yours,
Li Hua
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边的横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行的右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
| When our six children were total young, suppertime was always |
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| being interrupted by neighborhood children ring the bell. |
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| They wanted one child or another to come out and played. |
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| Finally we had good idea. We hung a sign on the front |
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| door that was read: “We’re having dinner. Come back |
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| later.” That night, we sat down to what they thought would |
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| be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals. But as soon as we |
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| began dinner, the doorbell rang. On the front door stood a |
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| five-year- old boy from across the street. He looked up |
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| at us and said, “I just want to know which the sign says.” |
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此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；
如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错——个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When we talk about city life, we’ll think tall________
buildings, busy streets and comfortable live___
conditions. Besides, there is much pollution in_____
the city now. People have to put up with noisy_______
and harmful smoke. How about country life? The_______
first feelings come into our minds are peace and quiet.___
We can enjoy the blue sky, golden crop and fresh air._____
But life in the country is not so easy as it in the city._____
In my opinion, if we pay attention to protect the_
environment and developing the country, and we’ll enjoy_____
a modern and peaceful life.
下面短文中有8处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改8处，多者（从第9处起）不计分。
| 例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily the  I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m.am in Friday evening. on |
Alice,
I have just got a good news to tell you. I win a national prize for painting in last week. My
father was very happy that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying there for
half a month, visiting place of interest and practicing my English as well. We’ve been writing to
each other for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed talking face to face with you. I hope
you’ll be on holiday yourself by that time and I can hard wait to see you!
Yours,
Lily
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Alice,
I have just got some good news to tell to you.
I win a national prize for painting last week.
My father was so pleasing that he suggested
I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying
there for half a month, visiting place of interest
or practicing my English as well. we’ve been
writing to each for nearly a year now. I have
often dreamed of talk face-to-face with you.
I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that
time. Perhaps we could go out to do some
sightseeing together.
Best,
Lily
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
I'm very glad to learn from your e-mail that you and your parents will come to Shanghai
and call on me in April 30th. But I'm terrible sorry that I can't meet with you at Shanghai
Pudong International Airport because I have to attend a meeting in Beijing. Now let me tell you the way to your home. When you get out the airport, you can take Bus NO.936 to Rainbow Hotel Shanghai. Walking across Xianxia Road to the west till you see the supermarket on your right. Turn to the left there and go straightly on. Then you can see a bank on your left. The apartment building I lived in is next to the bank. Find Room 601 that my mother will be waiting for you.