假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. Can you guess that what we did there? Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer labour.They reached the park at nine o'clock. The whole class divided into three groups. Group One planted trees and watered flowers. Group Two was told to pick up litter leaving by the tourists and cleaned all the benches. The group where I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's Playground. All of us worked hardly.Before noon we finished working. Each of us fell a little bit tired, so we were happy because we had done a good deed.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I was only about six that he held his hand 76. _________________
out to me. I took it in me and we walked. Then 77. _________________
I ask him, “Grandpa, how come you have 78. _________________
so much lines on your hand?” he laughed and 79. _________________
said, “Well, that’s a big question!” He was 80. _________________
silent for a moment. So he answered slowly:81. _________________
“Each these lines stands for a trouble in my 82. _________________
life.” I looked at his other hands. “But Grandpa, 83. _________________
what do you have more lines on that one?”84. _________________
“Because there are more the honors and joys 85. _________________
in my life.”
下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a trunk came
friends
to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a unbrella
beside an
because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in
i\n
that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful
was gratefully
accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road.
This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to
but
everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible ∧give without expect
someone/somebodyto expecting
anything in return.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One
day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father /\ the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a monthafter. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on later gave my own bicycle.
短文改错（共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分）
Dear Ken,
I am very exciting to learn that you’re coming to 76.
Beijing for the Olympic. Both my parent miss you a 77
lot. So do our friend, Cathy, August is the best time 78
of the year to visit Beijing, because of there is only 79
a few rain and the weather is neither too hot nor too 80
cold. There are so many places I want to take you to 81
after I finish my work like a volunteer. When you come, 82
you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers 83
far away from the National Stadium, also known as 84
the “Bird’s Nest”, where opening ceremony will be held. 85
Best regards,
Janet
| 1． |
Dear Alice, |
| 2． |
I win a national prize for painting last week. |
| 3． |
My father was so pleasing that he suggested |
| 4． |
I'd like to staying there for half a month, |
| 5． |
visiting place of interest |
| 6． |
or practicing my English as well. |
| 7． |
We've been writing to each for nearly a year now. |
| 8． |
I haveoften dreamed of talk face to with you. |
| 9． |
I imagine you'll be at vacation yourself by thatTime. |
| 10． |
Perhaps we could go out to do somesightseeing together. |