假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出增加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
One day, while my friend and I was traveling through Germany, we were not very hungry but we only had a little money. We decided to stop at a village market to buy something to eat. We choose
the cheapest biscuits and ate it under a tree. We thought the biscuits were great.“Let’s gets some more,” I said, “They’re cheap and they really taste well.” My friend could read some Germans, but I couldn’t, and I gave her the biscuit bag to find the name. She looked it and started to laugh, “How are you laughing?” I asked. “Because they’re dog biscuits!” She said.
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Part Three：Writing（two sections；full marks 35）
Section One：Error Correction（10 questions；1 for each，full marks 10）
本题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：
如此行无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）
如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列要求改正：
此行多一词，则把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，且也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词，则在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该词。
此行错一词，则在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
第一节：短文改错
We’ll never forget a day when76_______
my classmates and I paid a visit a77_______
chemistry factory. It was a large78_______
one with nearly 20 000 workers. It
looks like a garden and we saw col-79_______
orful flowers grass and trees there.
We also visited some workshop and80_______
found workers working hard. We
talked to them and learned a lot of81_______
We understood them further. On
the way home we felt very tiring, 82_______
but we both thought we had a very83________
good day. We really hoped what we84________
could get more chances of leaving
the school and learn about society.85________
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第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
I often dream of a teacher. I dream of standing on the 76. ______
platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys 77. _______
and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them 78. _______
growing up. I am always young when I was staying 79. _______
with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You 80. _______
have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges 81. _______
you can never learn well. What is more, you have to be 82. _______
friends with your pupils and take good care of him. 83. _______
Only in this way can you be a good teacher and win 84. _______
respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work
as very hard to make my dream come true.85. _______
第二卷
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节: 短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分；满分l0分)
此题要求改正所给文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有—个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号^,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear classmates,
I’ll tell everything about my future. Every 56. _______________
one of us is thinking about the future. Do you know what 57. _______________
yours is? I have decided to become a middle school teacher. 58. _______________
Does it sound surprised? I had this dream when I was only 59. _______________
a child. I love children. As we all can see, when teachers are 60. _______________
great needed in our country, especially in the countryside. Many 61. _______________
parents want their children to be well-educated, and they don’t 62. _______________
want them to be teachers. Perhaps one of the main reason is 63. _______________
that teachers work too hard but get too little. In spite that, I am 64. _______________
determined to devote all my life to teach in my hometown. 65. _______________
第二卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
I’ll graduate from our school soon. How a 76. __________
great three – year school life! I just find this 77. __________
really difficult to say goodbye to the nice
teachers or my dear good friends. They are always 78. __________
kind for me and I will miss them forever. 79. __________
Walk around the campus. I can still see 80. __________
my footsteps through the colorful school life 81. __________
and everything will be careful kept in my 82. __________
memory. I’m going to study harder than ever
to improve my English. I believe you work 83. __________
hard, you’ll surely make a great progress. Let’s 84. __________
try to make your dreams come true together. 85. __________
第Ⅱ卷
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last 76. _________
it has reached me. I am very glad to know that 77. _________
everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78. _________
Things here are same now as they were before. The 79. _________
final examination will take place in next week. So 80. _________
I am now busy preparing my lesson. It’s nice 81. _________
to think that the summer vacation was drawing 82. _________
near. I can’t say how many I want to see you all again. 83. _________
I am looking forward to spend summer days with you. 84. _________
Give my love to Father, Mother and someone at home. 85. _________