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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
I’m glad to write to you. It is near a month since you had left our hospital. I’m still worried about you. How are you get along these days? I think you may be much better now, but I’d better have a good rest and take good care of yourselves since you are sixty-year-old man. I still remember those days which you helped me to my English. With your help, I make good progress. But to my regretted, my English remains very poor though I have made good use of my time. Can you give me some advice on it?

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8p.m. in Friday evening. on

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties．The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep diaries．I followed her advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the class．Everyone said the story was the good one, I was great encouraged by their words．

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then
suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking. The trees were torn up and many buildings were leaned down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by the fallen buildings. She was knocked down by a tree before she knew. Two doctors carried him to safety and she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she had got over. Seeing such many goods from the
mainland of China and other countries, she believed all the destroyed houses would be built.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
editor,
I’m writing to tell you something about how we students use the Internet．As we all know, the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life．We often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign languages by ourselves on the Internet．Sometimes we sent e-mails to our families as well as our friends．Beside, we listen music, enjoy films and play computer games on it．We can even do shopping without leaving our homes．
However, it has its disadvantages．We waste too much time playing the electronic games, that has a bad effect on our studies．What’s worse, the bad information on the Internet do great harm to them．I hope we can make the use of the Internet proper for our studies．
Yours truly
Zhang Hua

Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time ________
watching television than they spend in school. Because so________
much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of ________
read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries________
much about the radio program young people listen to, ________
　　although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about ________
the effects of television commercials. On one year the _______
average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all________
planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want________
things that they don't real need.________