假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Bob,
Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself.My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of the China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese,English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
第Ⅱ卷
第四部分:写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。 ‘
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
The English Comer in Zhongshan Park is where people 76
go to practise their speaking English.Every Sunday afternoon 77
they gather around,talk to each other in English.Among 78
they are students,teachers,doctors,and so on.I first went to the 79
English Comer when 1 was in Junior Grade Two.1 went there on 80
every Sunday and chat with some people in English.In the 81
past three years I had never been absent.I’m sure I've made 82
some progresses in my listening and speaking.And I have 83
made many friends there.The English Corner is really good 84
place.I hope that more friends will join in us. 85
第二节:短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
One evening two young men were walking in the street.
They tried to find a chance to steal everything. The clock 76. __________
strikes twelve. Most people were in bed. Quickly they came 77. __________
to a house so it seemed that everyone in the house had fallen 78. __________
sleeping. Standing at the front gate, one man said in English to 79. __________
the other at a low voice, “You wait here. I will go around to 80. __________
the front door and then get into the house.” Suddenly out 81. __________
of the house ran a dog, barking at them. The two men were 82. __________
very afraid and ran away as fast as possibly. They didn’t stop 83. __________
until they had got to a lonely place. One man said to the other 84. __________
in surprise, “It’s too bad. I had thought that the dog could 85. __________
understand English.”
第二卷(共两节,共35分)
第一节:短文改错(共10小题;满分10分)
Pierre Loisel was used to work in a government1. ____________
office. One day he and his wife received a invitation 2. ____________
to a ball at the palace. Mathilde spent 400 francs to 3. ____________
a new dress but had no more money for jewellery. 4. ____________
She borrowed a beautiful necklace had a big stone5. ____________
in the centre from Jeanne. The couple have a good6. ____________
time at the palace. But after the ball, the necklace
was losing. They had to buy a new one for Jeanne. 7. ____________
In order to pay for the debts, the couple had to work 8. ____________
hard day or night. But only after Jeanne told her9. ____________
the truth, did Mathilde know the necklace only worth 10. ____________
500 francs at most.
短文改错
I am always interested in the traveling. My 1._________
reasons are quite simple and clearly. If anybody 2._________
is not satisfied with my opinion, I shall greatly 3._________
surprised at his ways of think. 4._________
First of all, traveling increased our 5._________
knowledge. Only by traveling can we see thing 6._________
outside our hometown.
In the second place, traveling is good with 7._________
our health. While we are traveling, we can 8._________
breathe in fresh air or exercise our bodies as well. 9._________
In a word, I sincerely hope that anybody must 10.________
grasp the opportunity of traveling.
短文改错(10分)
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中至多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每次错误及其修改均只限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.