请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Editor,
I was a happy girl with a warmly family. My parents loved each other although my family was poor. But everything changed when my father fell in love by a young girl about two year ago. Since then, quarrels happen at home almost on every day, left me and my sister crying in despair. I hate that woman which stole my father. I even hope to live with her before my parents separate and take revenge (报复) on him. But sometimes I think that is not right and I really didn’t want my parents to divorce. What should I do? Could you give me hand?
A desperate girl
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something what he did made people anger. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.
短文改错 (共10处错误,每改对1处1分,共10分)
Once there was boy. His mother was very fat but talked too much to him. He didn’t want his teachers and classmate to see her. Every time the parents’ meeting was held, he would ask a beautiful lady to attend it instead her. In return, she paid her 50 yuan each time. One day, he was serious ill and lost consciousness. So he sent to hospital by his teacher. Three days late he came back to life and got to know his mother had been looking after him all the time. He was so thankful that he cried and had told his mother how sorry he was for that he had done.
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
Dear Zhou Lu,
I’m writing a letter ask you for some help.
As you know, Zhang Fei and I used to be good friend. However, on one day, Zhang Fei read my private letter in secret and tell others what was written in it. Knowing this, I was extreme angry. I told her I would not be his friend any more. Hearing whatIsaid, Zhang felt very surprised and no longer stayed with me. Facing with this, I felt very upset. I am much angry with her improper behaviour, but I can’t forget the wonderful time that I stayed with her. I wonder whether I should forgive her. And I’m afraid if I offer to make friends with her, she will refuse me. How should I do?
Your friend,
Li Hua
短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is
common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend,
or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when
Tom, a disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for
her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind and care. With her he would not
have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result the great
effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university.
短文改错 (共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
An English lady was finally decided that she really should learn to drive. But after many attempts, she pass her driving test and told her husband that,
to release, he was going to drive him over to France for a holiday. But then
a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well,
it is all because of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have been practicing for three weeks now, but I still couldn’t get used to it, in fact,
I’ve nearly killed three peoples.”