短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 共10分)
If you walk around in some public place, you will notice most of smokers are young people and some are still middle school students. It is said that in China the number of people smoking are about 45%. Why do so many people smoke? Some think smoking gives themselves pleasure. Some even think that smoking can refresh them. In the fact, smoking is a bad habit that makes great harm to people’s health. Studies of smoking show that many kinds of diseases have anything to do with smoking. Smoking itself is a waste, that costs one much money. Besides, many fires are often causing by careless smokers. Today more and more people all over the world want to give up smoking.
下面短文中有 10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从 11 处起)不计分。
Last summer holiday, I take a trip to Yunnan. It is in the southern part of our country. It is really the very beautiful place grand mountains, clean rivers and kind people. Trees and flowers can seen everywhere. Every year there are lots of visitors. During the trip, I found that I like the elephants and fruits best. An elephant is more taller than I! I rode the elephant, because I was very afraid at first. But the elephant was seemed very friendly. I took some photos with them. The fruits there are very fresh and taste. They are very good for our health. The trip to Yunnan impressed me great. I will never forget it.
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者从第11处不计分。
How an unbelievable scene! A modern young couple were eating fruit in public and had thrown a plenty of waste on the ground. When an old cleaner came to clean up, the man was very angry. He points at the cleaner, saying in a loud voice,” How impolite ! They haven’t finished eating ! ” “How could people behave such badly ?” I thought. Obvious, in their eyes, they could do all that they liked and ignore other’s feelings. In my opinion, we should pay attention our behavior, obey public rules and respect other people’s work. We should know that civilized people are those who has good manners but a beautiful mind all the time.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
At present we are living in a good age. Therefore, there are still a small number of people who don't act responsible. His bad behaviors are out of place in our civilizing society. For an example, some people often risk their lives to disobey traffic rules. Littering is still a serious problem. Some people are often seen to spit in public places. Bad still, it is common to find silly things writing by some tourists in scenic spots.
To my opinion, everyone should learn to become a responsible citizen. We must aware that everything we do in public places will affect others and we should break our bad habits. As long as we obey the rule in every field and are filled with care and love, our world will become better.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或
修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the following
advices can help you.First in all, believe in yourself.Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly.
Yours,
Lily
下面文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching the computer software. An old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs. To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day. It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day. As a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the key of success.